I really love it so far i hope you don't drop it.also is there a discord link for pictures?
DISCLAIMER: I only made it to around chapter 20, the review is based on those chapters.Oh boy. This novel is absolutely horrendous.To start of, writing quality is a dumpster fire, there are tons of plot holes and inconsistencies which you cover up by saying, ‘Mc who has no real life experience and only stayed home watching anime until the story started made a backup plan to the ****ty plan he made in the first place’ for example, him letting the other gangsters run away and *past* the zombies the Mc attracted w/ his gunshot instead of back into the theater. What was the backup plan anyway? Something along the lines of ‘he had a backup plan for that anyway’ just doesn’t cut it. And don’t even get me started on him not destroying his wrist with his shotgun. He shot it ONE HANDED. a SHOTGUN. instead this kid who happened to be the Mc has pinpoint Accuracy and insane logical thinking.Now, the side characters. Ignoring that for some reason they’re all female except the poor shop workout without a name, it feels like even the ‘fleshed out’ ones are just cardboard cutouts. And why did you think TWO chapters of FILLER BACKSTORY would be a good idea? Nobody cares about this character and wasting time isn’t gonna help.And please nobody even say something like ‘hmph, you are simply low iq without patience, the novel gets better you absolute cabbage..’ I don’t care if it gets better, the beginning is what hooks your reader.I’m not wasting more time reading more of this poor excuse for a novel.
After the news was over, I immediately continued my footsteps to the room.
"Of course not Doc."
"Assistan!" the doctor shouted.
"My life is coming to an end, but before I go I need to tell you something." Yige spoke with a voice of someone who knew they were going to die and were passing on their last will. Responding to Yige didn't even think about what Yige wanted to tell him and instead said "you can't die now I won't let you die" nearly crying as he spoke. "Hao Ren I came here because of an energy source that was attracting me here with it's will, but now that i'm here and i've met you I realized that it wasn't me who was meant to come here, but you." Yige's eyes winced at the pain from his wound after speaking for so long. In a confused state Hao Ren asked Yige. "What do you mean by it was me who was meant to be here? It was calling out to you otherwise if it wanted me it would've called out to me." "Yes, it did call out to me so that you would hear me and find me inside this place. So that you could ask me the question thats been on your mind." Yige all of a sudden sounded like a profound elder as he said this. "How did you know I wanted to ask a question?" asked Hao Ren curiously. "I have lived longer than you can imagine. It is not difficult for me to see these things." Yige said in with a slight chuckle under his breath. After pondering for some time on if he should ask this question Hao Ren decided. "Was it the humans who started this war?" Even Yige was shocked to hear this question, but nevertheless he answered sincerely. "Yes, the humans did attack our young and in our families rage we killed many humans. That is enough talk my time is near and you need to go further in the cave to attain what you seek."
Shancai:"you told me to help you... If you don't open up and tell me what's wrong I cannot help you"
My root system however is vast and thick where it matters, I make a very adorable iceberg where all my true size is out of view. The more I grow my roots the more space I'm aware and in control of. Even if I'm not directly touching in I seem to be claiming a certain area of space.
As Naruto began to draw in some Natural Chakra, the sound of screaming and fighting broke out around them, washing over them as hundreds of Ultron Sentries came out of nowhere, causing havoc on the city. Flying around the towering buildings, sprinting across the bustling streets, the hundreds upon hundreds of Sentries began to open fire on the city and its civilians.
And all that glitters is gold
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
Judging by the hole in the satellite picture