RafItech
25+ something like that
i will kill the author becomes better the more you read. you can actively see the writer's skills getting better
it is sad that it has been on hiatus for a few months tho
Do not even try it. 2/10: The fights are won by the one who has the "stronger" roar... The author keeps repeating over and over again the same "recipes." All the time, people would be stunned by how Mc did this or that and then wash and rinse. It's not worth suffering the pain of reading this joke.
What Is the meaning of Shounen ai tag?
Is tha the same as Yoai?
It's a good story, will be waiting for future updates!????
What is better, WN or LN? And how can I read?
I enjoyed the the story. If you cut out stupid horny scenes this story can be much better ( sometimes it feels like this author never had any relationship or is very poor at social skills with women) Some things I would like to point out though which I didn’t like. Mc can be very annoying sometimes and goes simp halfway through. Promise to marry a girl but barely spend anytime with her but he def finds and harass other girl and acts like a retard. Ending felt bit rushed extra chapter or 2 would have made it better. Thirdly you feel sometimes there is lack of tension as you he is kinda op which is bit of a let down Overall i would give it 6.8/10
Mostly because shimazu was a piece of shit. Why waste time thinking about that guy?
rescuing ace makes no sense ...no i have to say that war at the top makes no sense.
I'm going all out with this one since I'm annoyed.This could've been a great series BUT characters were bad. Lots of meddlesome side characters, dumb AF main female lead and good for nothing annoying male lead. I've read a lot of story plot like this but this is honestly one of the most annoying one I've read. (Also the one with the most annoying male lead I've ever seen)Story plot is quite good, just hate the characters specially the main ones. Geez.. Usually people would like the male lead in reverse harems but in this one honestly I'd rather choose the secondary characters.Male lead forces himself on the MC (literally,kinda felt like MC just fell for him cause he keeps forcing kisses on her and pushing her down), male lead kidnapped the kid and married another woman instead of being honest with MC about the situation (the chapters after he kidnaps the kid was actually quite boring imo) and there's lots of stupid decisions and actions by MC that made me facepalm and scream, the side characters are soooo annoying and so meddlesome in all times.Rate would be 6/10 though. Plot is nice (cultivation, secret world, devils, revenge or face slapping) and it's kinda well written. This is just my thoughts and review (kinda lol, just wanted to rant this out cause I'm annoyed)
the English and writing... is barely readable, you could but you need to have patience in rearranging them to make it manageable. Mistakes like comma, capital letters and redundancy are issues I just... sigh.other than the occasional commentary, there isn't much of a change and that's just a waste of time, as I could just watch the anime.the Character... there are a lot of plotholes like his psychology and pacing in character development, he didn't change and even if he did he just copy pace the mc. And not a good one at that.the System... god why... normally I have no problem but the pacing and redundancy is just an eyesore.
Yeah I just tried to read through but every time I read it just gets harder to read, random 4th wall breaks or ranting about thinks I haven't even seen others comment on. Random powers even though none of them are needed dude becomes a sword master but can barely describe what a sword even looks like. Imma be honest only started reading cause Fubiki but its not even Fubiki its a transmigrater in Fubiki. He hides powers for the plot... all that. In my eyes the translation isn't terrible but it gets harder and harder to read is you get further in. And it just follows the stroy without much change, which is boring but I don't blame the author for it.
