Okay so I need to talk about Zongzheng Ling because this man is absolutely fascinating and I am here for it. Like, think about what just happened — Bai Jinshu is being harassed by her husband Ao Jing in front of literally the entire royal family, and who steps in? Not Ao Jing, not the Empress (who is clearly seething), but Zongzheng Ling. He doesn't just defend her, he STAKES HIS LIFE alongside her. "Add this humble subject's life as well. Should she fail to cure the Emperor Emeritus, I am willing to be held accountable alongside Princess Jinshu!" This is not casual behavior. This is a man who just threw his entire reputation and possibly his head on the line for a woman he apparently has no connection to at all. And then the way he addresses her — "Princess Jinshu" instead of "Princess Consort of Jing" — when Ao Jing corrects him, Zongzheng Ling's response is absolutely chilling: "Soon, she won't be." That line hit me like a truck. He's not just saying she'll be divorced. He's saying he's going to MAKE sure she's not Ao Jing's wife anymore. This man is plotting something and I am OBSESSED. Meanwhile, the Imperial Noble Consort is the only adult in the room and I love her for it. She's the one who actually stands up to Ao Jing, who protects Bai Jinshu, who notices what Bai Jinshu is doing with the injection and COOPERATES without causing a scene. She's clearly perceptive and strategically kind, which makes me wonder — does she know more than she lets on? The fact that she stayed behind while everyone else left tells me she's not just being polite. And Ao Jing? Ugh. He's the worst. He's angry, entitled, and completely blind to the fact that he's about to lose everything. The Empress is also furious but hiding it behind silence, which is honestly scarier than if she'd exploded. This family is a powder keg and someone is holding the match.
is this about Isekai? oh yeah improve your writing style, it's already pretty good, but sometimes it looks messy. keep fighting!
I really like the first 19 chapters, they are well written with no errors at all and some sophistication that you don’t often see on this sight but not overdone to the point where the author is trying to hard. I like the mentality of the MC and excited for his class and level up. Only problem is last update was 14 days ago, so author pls come back.
Love it! I'm not into these kinds of stories but I love the way you write this! and the plot intrigues me! keep it up!
Love the story and the flow of it. The characters here are also interesting and I love how it's progressing so far. Keep updating author. ?
I think characters in this novel are just perfect
Potential! I must say, it is exciting diving into the world. While it's not without flaws, the potential of the plot and promise on display are certainly good.Writing - Needs improvement. A lot. But it's readable, understable and sufficient. Still, if the author can improve the writing by a level or two, it will be amazing. Tip- Focus on some realistic reactions from characters, situations and such. Plot- Since there isn't much of plot given till now, I have considered it's potential. If The author plays it right, the plot can become a great piece among 'system' contents.Character - Dialogues! they make or break the characters and it is good to see, character have plenty interaction. Well done there. Just needs some refinement.World Building- Although not unique in its genre with systems, ranks, monsters, etc. I could understand the world quite a lot from the first 15 chapters. So, I would say it was done great. Well, there is more to explore in future, so I belive again in it's potential.Overall, it is a good story. Needs editing and refinements, but still enjoyable.
Luna Library is a magical tale of magic and God's with a cast of characters you would expect of a fantasy setting. However, there were many story beats that made inner monologuing difficult to comprehend. Alongside the many flashbacks that did not have enough descriptive text for me comprehend, visualization wasn't very clear me either on what I was reading.The story begins and ends (as of the latest chapter) with Sukafu Shiori, our main lead. As she goes through explaining roughly where she is and how characters and objects interact around her, I had this nagging feeling of if there was anything about Sukafu that I felt to root for. I understand she she is flawed in aspects not known to the reader yet, but with her hostile defensive nature to keep people away, I just did not know what to think. Does she think everything and everyone is out to get her or is she just doubtful of everything? I do not know who Sukafu Shiori is, what her motives are, and what she has experienced. I also did not get a sense of Sukafu having a "sarcastic edge and sharp tongue" as her character description says. Perhaps it would have been better formatting to have italics and wordplay to show these aspects more clearer.On the topic of other characters, everyone seems to have a mysterious past. It feels as if I am reading a detective novel without any clues ever resolving. Sukafu's mother has ties with Liberty Belle, God of Hard Covered Books. Sukafu's mother seems like she is bubbly, friendly, and an all round nice person, but she seems to not have parented Sukafu better. She lacks parental skills such as guidance and how to be okay with vulnerability. The nuture is apparent from Sukafu's present stance. As for the God of Hard Covered Books, from their interactions with Sukafu, it sounds like she is but only a pawn in his plans. I do not know if these adult figures want to help Sukafu or use her. I also thought Sukafu accepting that she is now an angel quickly felt out of character.Korraline Belle (Korra) seemed like the most easygoing character dispute her introduction seeming very random. I think she has the most dynamic potential with any character relationships she may run into. I really do want to root for Sukafu seeing as she is our main lead with everything around describing how they affect her, but Korra seems to be the more likable character so far.Before, I still felt very lost whilst reading. I had a moment of realization that it felt as if I was just dropped into the middle of an already going plot. It even took me a few more reads to finally understand that in the flashbacks sequence, it was Sukafu and her mother that lived in a run down bus.The story seemed to pick up at a better pace on ch7. More of the world lore was introduced followed by character dialogue between Sukafu and Korra. The lives of our party also have been threatened with the arrival of a moon goddess that seeks the destruction of where our party is staying. This part seems the most interesting to me and I wish to read more about the start of Sukafu and Korra's adventure.Other things I enjoyed were the angel rules. It gives a clear set idea of how Sukafu will be acting moving forward in the story as to answering my question as to why she does not swear. I also enjoyed the hot dog costume for its out of place nature compared to the impending war.All in all, is Luna Library worth your time reading? Not yet as of now with only 7 chapters. There is not enough substance to keep the reader engaged. However, if the beinning plot points are restructured to help benefit the overall consistency of the story and the direction leads towards more character interactions, there is gold waiting to be dug.Edit:There are now 8 chapters with the previous chapter 1 being split into 2 chapters. I enjoyed the segue from death to flash back scene. It played out more smoothly compared to before.Will update when there are more chapters...
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Details... I like all the fkin details the author trying to describe... It's vivid but not too much, and the comical relieves, playful banters between the characters, especially Luna & Ren... This book is fkin AMAZING!!!Keep the good work, Author!!