2 certain paragraphs... were ? but the transition of situations in the story is very much intriguing.. the mystery I liked the most and I am excited to read the next chapter.??
really like it till now hope the writing quality stays the same its very nice and immersive to read, im already invested lol the mc is really good too
A great book , the first 25 chapter hook me up, it has a lot of potential, great grammar, interesting characters design . Looking forward for more chapters.
5 stars, why not? But really, I amma be honest, it's more like 3.5 stars in my standards. Will strive to become faster and better. At the moment I write too slow and bad.
Baby lock the door and turn the lights down lowAnd put some music on that's soft and slowBaby we ain't got no place to goI hope you understand
Overall a good book. I recommend everyone to read it. later part one the book is excellent.
Interesting novel that did have me engrossed to read further. I was kind of put off at first with the age of the MC but it seems to flow naturally which opens up a lot of possibilities. Though hopefully a time skip can be done and push him to the age of 16+.I am very disappointed with the fact that the author has not updated a pile of chapters, marking them not to purchase. However as i bought some batch chapters I unfortunately purchased two of these. Feel very annoyed with this. Looking further down the chapter listing I see the rest are the same so either the author is to lazy to delete them or update them correctly.The novel has a lot of potential but I am in doubt with the authors ethics at this stage and hope he has some satisfactory response.
I'll msg you about an idea you could put in your story.
Hello! Author here.DTM is my first novel ever, and I have tried my best to make it as good as possible. Please let me know what you think about it and ask any questions you may have.
Only one chapter is out so there's not much to say, but man, did it get intense. I like the writing style and even though the plot isn't there just yet, it for sure does have me looking forward to the next chapter. I also love the relationship between the brothers, it's cute. This is a great start, keep up the good work author-kun!
well l think the book is ok at the beginning you may think that it's not interesting when you reach chapter two to begin to understand ,it nice it needs patience
it's a nice novel......interesting so far