Basically, it is inspired by Ember Knight, Nanomachine, and Reformation of the Deadbeat Noble.The story of a villager who after a bandit raid on his village woke with nanomachines in his bloodstream. How did the 'nanomachines' get into his world? Probably 'aliens' or something of a similar nature.
Great fantasy novel I love the MC and this is funny as hell
the idea isn't bad it's just lacks proper execution , the first mistake u made is not giving the main character a proper backstory at the beginning of the story , a backstory allows us to know why the mc is so resourceful in the wild ,how was he able to sneak up on the boar without being noticed , it lets us know what kind of character the mc has and it lets us know why the mc has good looking physique without a proper backstory it makes everything the mc does feel like it's coming out of know where , also your main character is coming to conclusions to fast without proper explanation or thinking , I Can except if he guessed he was transmigrated , but the mc shouldn't have figured out he has soul magic by just using it once and progression with the power is a litt little bit to fast , also the mc is in wilderness , creating a harem of beast girls should be the last thing on his mind , it makes him look like somebody who doesn't have common sense and him thinking of turning an animal into beast girl is weird and out pocket, if u wanted to add that sheep girl , u could have just had the MC turn the sheep into waifu by mistake or accident , that way u could have added the sheep girl and it wouldnt make the main character come across as an idiot and its less weird as for the rest , there are too many chapters for how little the story progressed , these 10 chapters can easily be compressed to 4 chapters . That's all i have too say , u have potential u are just not using it properly let me give u advice , anytime u write a chapter , read it before hand and ask yourself is there anywhere i can improve and making it better or more exciting
It's a very good story just what I was waiting for a medieval battle and political novel with plots
great story doing this to up u can update a little more because i loved the recent chapter (cp102) it was amazing i could practicly feel and see the world your writing.
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I read until chapter 7, first of all; I like how the author uses different POV, the author is certainly good at switching POVs. Haru is such a nice guy; I like this kind of mc, will definitely stick to this story for Haru. Chapter 1 story telling about the general lore is well portrayed! Its makes me wonder what happened to the other heroes as well. I'm rating this 9/10, the remaining 1 is because it still has potential.
I love it, the reason why I’m not putting it at 5 stars is because we haven’t really seen any other characters other than the mc, and the world while promising, has yet to be explored by us readers. But the writing and grammar? Godlike, there is not a SINGLE mistake I’ve seen, truly one of the best written works I’ve read in a while just based on the writing skill. For people like us, who like ruthless mc’s, this is definitely for you, he does not care about anyone other than himself, and his ruthless levels equal Fang Yuan, so yeh, very enjoyable for people like us
nice story but I am not able to understand
It started out well, but the MC literally lacked intelligence and common sense, I find the way he uses the system very stupid, a waste of my time.
WTH ….. no chapters and WebNovel team high on their lame management select this tiltle for December campaign ..
author is there Yuri or ntr in it I hope not