Excellent! Expect nothing less from the lord of chakra himself.Seen his previous books, and I'm certain that this would be yet another great one.Keep moving author san??
Don't lose hope try to make more better and keep it up. I really like this novel add some romance also.
okay it's a pretty good story i like system novel keep it up
very good story.... waiting for more chapters
I really like it, I want to give it higher rating but it would be unfair since there only 1 chapter currently. Looking forward for the next chapter!
The story is so nice. The characters are top notch also. The writer did a great job!?This is one of a kind I can't wait for the nextIt's soo thrillingHmmmmmUnto the next
I love time travel and this book writes it well, it's steamy between the leads as well so keeps u looking forward to another chapter, please write more author-nim?
This novel is wonderful, with one of the best world settingI've ever seen;Rome?Check it out, i think it has great potential, nice work author
Well the story is good, nice try for a newbie author. can't wait for more updates, keep going.i would like to comment on your narrative skills, its really good too though you will really need to work on it.
Hi! Author's here. I just want to say WELCOME for those who visit or view this book and THANK YOU for the support. <3Help me buy a cup of coffee by sharing some power stones and leaving some review or comments. Also, share this to your families, friends, coworkers or boyfriend/girlfriend. "sana all"Hope you'll enjoy this book :)
Incredible story i love the way eliot is depicted in this novel , very nice story writing and i like the way many chapters get realased would rate this story a 5/5 incredible
I was not expecting much from smuts these days but the author really crafted an interesting world and characters for me to get invested. I'm not gonna say much and let you guys read this one. If you're a degenerate like me you'll love it. Great job author ????