First time im writing a review about a novel so i will be honest. The ideia behind the novel is good, but the author makes no sense of it, no world building, no explanations of how things came to be, no nothing. He forgets abouts the things says in chapters like,1 example: MC(rank F) acts like a allmighty being against a B rank and challenges him to a fight in due a week?(1 month? dont really remember) then 3 to 4 chapters says that he has to "play low" (in a área wihlth ONLY F and E ranks) so that he doenst get in trouble like "stupids mcs" from others novels. Like wtf, did you forget about what you wrote in before!?!?!?!?....And guess what he did yes, because its been weeks and zero mention about the fight.2 example: When MC entered the new zone with the new base there was a mention of an horde that would "challenge" the lords of the new zone in 10 days and once again the author totally forgot about that. There are so many more like this ones that its just sad. Im not telling you to give up on writing, but try to remake and improve before continuing to progressing the novel.Keep the consistency of his power.. If he can summon 20 skeletons in the new area everyday then in the chapter 95 he should have something like 200 skeletons( half at least F+) , or something like 20 E+/D and in the latest chapts author says he can already summon 60 skeletons a day(its been a while already so dont really remember) so MC should have an army of skeletons and you cant use the excuse of "sacrificing" them for power forever. You say one thing in chapter and another in the next. Once again, Im not telling you to give up, but a lot of improvement is needed. Im not an expert and not a writer, just a reader who gave his opinion.If you think Im wrong dont hesitate to let me know.Cumps,
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It has a very good Storyline With Good Plot and Good Introduction It Has a mixture of Fantasy action Romance and sect cultivation Even though it kinda wrong
The writing style is really good honestly.The novel is not the usual Chinese glitch it's very enjoyable it feels like it's old school and at the same time it looks like a western novel.I really enjoy this I hope the update will be faster
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Story started out pretty good, but took a dive at around chap 14 for me. Starts to turn inconsistent and the time skips are miss placed which takes away from the story for me.
Loved it, there were a few typos but nothing that really broke the story or its emotions that it invokes.Lots of moments where i was genuinely immersed in the story. Good characters, good story, the world itself could be more fleshed out but other than that it is amazing.Would have left a review sooner but WebNovel kept glitching out and wouldn't let me submit one. However that won't stop me. :)
please update.. the story is so refreshing...
The story is super funny. I have to stop myself from laughing out loud while reading.
Story is good ?.This is my first time when I am reading a novel this far.I am not a novel person.I always would love to read manga or manhwa but when I start reading novel of this manga out of curiosity it attract me so much that I had read all the chapters of this novel those were realised till know. And know I search daily for new chapters of this novel.Thank you for your mind blowing story and story telling.
This might seem like an author been shameless, but still I would like to point out a few things about this book. It's dark, a touch of horror, fantasy, cultivation and mysteries. The plot is a genuine work... my work, and it starts the Mc as a pathetic nobody who found his greatest strength within the cold hands of death. The MC's path takes a drastic turn when he encounters the canyons and the catacombs. Both death and bones were mixed in a horrifying throes that made for a futuristic twist in the novel. Read and see how things take a step forward...
First of all before I say anything about the story, there is one thing that I liked more then any, was the authors comment I loved that part more and now lets get back to the story. It was good the pacing was good the names that author pick was also beautiful like the name Selene and yess Selene Supermacy and haters will get what they deserves! It was a nice idea of devouring the beast beautifully written keep up the work Author_san!!