Tale Of The Strongest Blade Master

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In over 20 chapters of this novel I only liked when the mc read the comments on his review of the technology. Translation wise it is fine. I just don't like the story or the characters. The mc and pretty much everyone he meets annoys me. For whatever reason this story also has to glorify the mc by using misunderstandings for people to think the mc is better than he is. I would much rather the story put a large focus on the reviews and the tech. Maybe this happens later but I don't wish to continue reading to find out.

I'm caught up with Translation. It’s very similar to Game Market 1983. And a better version of the Prodigal System. The author has built up the story extremely well and a good cast of characters.It’s all well thought out, no wonder it’s popular in China. However, it's easy to imagine this getting quite repetitive. All MC does is try to fail, make games,face-slap. All a cycle. Conclusion: The best Business CN. But that's all. All that’s missing is some good romance. Honestly, it’s just the story feels too perfect that it’s missing something. Author really teased us with the hot secretary.

Not that good considering the other harry potter fanfictions. There is little to no character development and also does not stress much on the main character just keeps going on and on about the events. It seriously is not good, you can read it but don't blame me for not warning you

Honestly one of the best books I’ve read on this platform. Though it’s a shame it had to be dropped I commend the author for their efforts.  

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