"You're from the Central Dorm too. Supposedly you already have a spot in the Inner Court."
"Okay, let's start!" (Chai)
I have to get stronger so I can not only pay back Kaiden, but to also help those from my village.
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Just finished what seems to be the first volume, and since the author asked for feedback, I figured I'd renew mine.The climax felt pretty satisfying and things see m to have calmed down a bit after episode 122, and I'm honestly relieved not to be stressing over what's going to happen next. It was a nice break after all the craziness at the end, and I really enjoyed it definitely different from other novels I’ve read.I've been reading for free, so I’m dropping a positive review to show support. I hope volume 2 is just as good as the first! Also I saw lots of ads so I hope that helps in some way Thanks!
Overall I’d say pretty good, one thing I appreciate is that the writing and grammar is readable without egregious mistakes. World setting and character design is fairly in depth and thorough although sometimes I find myself lost in terms of the different powers of stuff. Sure the author has clearly laid out the power structure but it’s easy to forget when switching between colors and tiers and the “well this person has a tier 3 core but their attacks are tier 4” idk maybe it’s just me but I find it confusing.A word of caution, this book is nauseatingly cliche, I won’t take away stars for it because it was warned at the beginning but sometimes I find myself just wanting to skip the long sections of cliche wholesomeness. Personally I’d like to see a bit darker of a setting with more conflict.
This writer is amaxzing. this book too is really good. though of course he/she is a starter (I could tell) but overall. the book is amaxzing
Okay, I’m reading this novel; I’m on chapter 2. Honestly, the beginning is funny, and I’m looking forward to the rest of the chapters!........
magiging makasarili muna ako bias eh HAHAHAHA
It's updated till 9 chaps and so far so good, except some cringe lines along the way which makes you laugh ?? and the author needs to work for the grammar a little bit... overall, it's all good actually... I absolutely love it ? it's a fresh story and I hope the author doesn't drop this novel
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The story was quite good I like how he picked up his life...there is so much to learn in this story. it's a must-read.l like the Leon character a lot.keep it up, dear.....