A strong start with immersive world-building and a unique futuristic setting. The pacing feels natural, and Yoshi is a compelling main character with hidden depth. Definitely worth following.⚙️?✨
This is my first time reading a female protagonist novel, and it is a must try.Fantasy mixed with romance.I really like Myra though she is too giving towards Nora but I understand why.
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I swr I love this book, it was so catching that I read three Ch straight up, I'd continue reading it so make sure to update well .
This book is great,I can't wait for Chapter 3
nice book ... keep going ????????????????????????
I don't think it's bad but not good either. I think the basic idea had very good potential. But it's more of a story that has an OP MC who will conquer everything with little difficulty. I missed the good depth in the story, too like in the politics.However, it is worth reading if you want a story where the MC is revolutionary, strong (OP), kingdom building, strengthening the bloodlines, no real difficulties or complications.
Frustrating read. Info dumps. They aren't necessary. Its a superficial way of adding background. I say that since the impact of that knowledge is none. It's a detriment to the narrative since the flow of the story is interrupted seemingly every paragraph for a random tidbit of info. Some novels have auxiliary chapters for power scales, levels, etc. I prefer the novels that include the information, as it becomes "necessary" to know. Rather than the author saying, this is all important stuff, here is a whole chapter for info that will serve you nothing. Here is a block of text about a random aspect of the world that doesn't matter at all.The notes act as if all readers have 0 IQ. Both info dumps and author's.The author's notes are intrusive. Random comments in the text, or just at the end of text. They sometimes are simple and harmless like, "memorable visit indeed". Its just pointless to add. Other notes are defensive notes, as if to defend against readers saying why MC is being reckless, or something else. MC goes potion crafting, fear not, we have very necessary info dumps about alchemy to explain things. Author note talks about how MC has shadow guards following him all the time. Next chapter, he is interacting with them. The note is pointless if we can read about these things. I've got other problems but just these 2 make the novel a plodding read.
Peak story and great writing looking forward to the revenge Pls don’t drip author
Omg, this book is more entertaining than any other I've read recently on this platform. It's so funny with surprises in every turn of the page. Just take my money!!!!
If you came for what the synopsis says strap in it will be a while I’m at chapter 80 and still haven’t got to it yet good story so far but I am getting tired of this huge prologue hope it gets to the story I came for before I quit reading for taking to long and wasting my money
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