mayankharwani22

Its alright.ssssssssssssssssssfagfbrhxbdbeizbdbrjsjcnbrnsjdhcbruchdjdvsienfjcjfhrssssssssssssssssssfagfbrhxbdbeizbdbrjsjcnbrnsjdhcbruchdjdvsienfjcjfhr... I needed 140 characters

The story seems nice with a uncommon system that I personally have not seen before. But unfortunately its a real pain to read due to bad editing and some grammar mistakes, Hopefully Author-san can get an editor to make it more smooth to read, until then thats the best I can say...