Through its masterful storytelling and nuanced character development, this novel takes readers on a transformative journey, unveiling layers of complexity in its exploration of the human experience. From moments of profound emotion to gripping twists and turns, it captivates from beginning to end, leaving an indelible impression long after the final page is turned.
a hidden gem, such a shame that it has so little views
Hi, Author here with a shameless 5 star review despite my story saying otherwise. The purpose of this is to clarify some things about this novel and its story to the viewers.
First, this book is not meant to be some amazing story with unique plot development or anything truly extraordinary.
If that was what you are looking for, then this isn't for you.
This isn't to say that I plan to write a copy and paste story with repeated clichés all over the place, but I won't go into this novel expecting an amazing story with plot developments and story arcs that have never been done before. This novel was always something I started writing to fill up my free time and also finally act on my passion for writing which brings me to my next point.
This is the first novel I have ever written. The quality is not going to be amazing and honestly, I am already extremely happy with the support I have gotten for this book so far as it was completely unexpected to me.
Now, to clarify the biggest doubts about the story, this is NOT A HAREM!!
Personally, I love harems... when they are done well that is. Unfortunately, I neither have the skill nor confidence to say I can write a good harem story with interesting characters and epic character growth and development between the MC and the female leads. The MC will interact with various women throughout the story but the story will not progress into a harem. If that was what you were looking for, this is not the novel for you.
Also, you may see some negative reviews and comments about the early chapters of my book and I am ashamed to admit that most of those reviews were true. However, after I finished the first volume, I went back and took the time to make corrections to the earlier chapters, making Lake appear less like a creep and the reaction between characters feel more realistic. Although I can’t say it completely fixed all of the problems with the early chapters as I was still deeply inexperienced when writing them, it helped to deal with the major ones. These changes did not affect the overall story in anyway so if your someone who has read ahead already, there is no need to go back and read these chapters.
Finally, like I said before, this is my first novel, so any feedback or flaws you may have spotted in my novel, whether they be grammatical errors or your personal opinion on the story is always appreciated. These things help to progress my writing skills and allow me to gain a completely new perspective on how to approach writing a story arc or chapter which all helps to improve the quality of my work.
If you still choose to stick around and continue to read this book after reading this review, I appreciate you taking the time to read this novel.
The story was amazing i read until chapter 81 but because of horrible translation i couldn't continue it's only a little better than machine translation it's a waste of money ofPaying for this sort of translation
(Stoped reading after chapter 60) The book is boring, the author tries to make the Mc super edgy, the type that is like 'I am too lazy to deal with this because I lost someone I love' The Auther tries to add drama and dramatic reveals but he fails horribly it just becomes boring best example (spoiler) The mc learns that his sister the one he was being a edge lord about was there with him but without her memories, then his system tries to kill him because she was jealous and then it is revealed that mc has people living in his head, (This happens in the span of a chapter) Then there is the grammar, well let's just say thet it can be seen that the author is not a native english speaker and those mistakes kill my motivation to continue with the story.The author is Indian so the story has a lot of references to indian culture and religion. This does not bother me, but I would like to note it.Summery: The Mc is a depressed 'boo hoo'. I lost someone, and I know it was not my fault, but I still blame myself, and now i am haunted by her ghost and hear her voice in my head. [Highy unlikeable]The plot is all over the place.[It makes it seem that the author had no vision for the story, so he just wrote randomly]Random Drama that serves no purpose.[ Full of loop holes]Random Lore Drops [some chapters are some lore] ( I paid real money for a chapter, and it was just unimportant lore)2/5 Would not recommend the only reason it is not a 1 is because the world building is mildy interesting and the writing is not 'Young Master Chen: Courting Death' Terrible.
Basically guy reincarnated/Isekaid to a xianxia world become number 1 expert and about to die. So he got a system before his death and the system promised that he will be revived as long as his Disciples reach Saint realm, which they did 3000 years later. He got partially revived because before his death he got an enlightenment and makes him more powerful, therefore more energy was needed to revive him, which the system does not have. Now he is forced to basically becomes a dungeon core and have to kill people to revive.Imo it's not bad. There's some inconsistencies with some term but not a lot. As for other things such as character.. Well it's only 20 chapters and until now there's really not much that the Mc has done..Overall I would say to give it a try, might be good might be bad.
i'm getting pretty tired of finding what seems to be a good story,but they have locked chapters i have to pay to read.i got this FREE app to read interesting,not pay for literally 70% of itsigh. sorry for the rant,i needed to say SOMETHING since i cant read it ill just give three stars to get my review out there
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I seem to have missed the attempted comedy tag on this novel.
So I read all the free chapters which was like 40 something. From what I could read, there is so much to work on, just in the beginning chapters. Author should go back and fix it and if the rest of the novel is like this then it's not worth reading in my opinion. Lots of inconsistencies and information being put out with no explanation like Magic. It hurt to read it and this is as far as I go. GL
Hello, author here. Thank you for having given my second novel a chance. I plan to update two chapters every day. Moreover, I always read the comments, so I will fix every error that you point out in less than a day.Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say