"You sure sweety?" she questioned slightly concerned about her as she wiped her mouth with her arm and sweept the crumbs off her bed.
"Envy, we didn't ask that. However, since you don't seem to intend changing what you already once said, I'm going to tell you the reason of our game. You're interested, aren't you?"
Or should he say, his own reflection.
''SHEN''
suddenly the mood turned raelly bloody. the 600 lords all surounded the invisible dragon in an instan and he invisible dragon cooly put off his cigar took off his coat and sungalss and stared at the 600 lords.
this is insanely good, I have no clue why this doesn't have any reviews yet. awesome characters, unique world, great interactions between characters.the only thing that people might not like is the slower progression bit that's something I like.now for the spoiler people, it's about a group of people who appear in a new world as vampires who learn they cam wield magic. the vampires are unique and follow some tropes yet also have some original traits. 10/10 can't wait for more
Worth reading if you are into comedy, drama and romance with action time to time. just writing quality took a hit but manageable to understand, somewhat.
Hi there, the writing is quite straightforward and couldn't help but struggle to read because of some punctuation problems in it. It's not my type of thing but it's got potential!
Average, nothing new or outstanding, quite similar to Tyranny of Steel, but I'll reserve my judgement for now and see where it goes in the future
いつも楽しませてもらってます。私はこの小説の世界観が好きです。まだ明らかにされていない設定がこれから明らかにされていくのが楽しみです。
Great read definitely recommend this to anyone who enjoys long novels! The adventure and the unexpected plot twist are really awesome!
I hop you won’t take offense in this, but consider editing your book. I suggest using grammar-checking apps like Grammarly. This story has a nice premise, but it would be better if you touch up the grammar, spelling, and punctuations.