You got all my stones again ??????????????????????⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐??????????????????????????????????
Author here; thank you to everyone who’s supporting the work, I’ve been AFK for a long time but now I am back, and I will continue to upload daily, much as possible.
Not a bad start. You have grammar mistakes here and there and some of your sentences are a bit too long. I do like the way you describe things so far, paints a clear enough picture. I would appreciate more descriptions of the surrounding.Overall, a good start.
The synopsis is quite interesting, and the storyline is quite interesting. However, a lot of editing is needed when it comes to grammar. Other than that, it is a well-written story.
The first half was a little difficult to get into, but the later half took on some charm. I have hopes for a more rich tale as the story continues.
Prologue and backstory taking way too long blah blah blah Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
5 stars for the cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This book is amazing I need moreeeeee......a **** give him a dragon and a grim ripper summoning dammit And give him a monster magician too hahahaha
A very good Novel, I love how the concept of cultivation was introduced, definitely going to keep reading, good work author!!
Amazing read. As expected from the writer of Library of Heaven's Path. The face slapping is awesome. The characters are very solid and there aren't any noticeable grammatical errors. I really like how main character is not so OP and how the story story is progressing. I want moooooore!!!!!
Needs edited by a human again. Too many wrong pronouns which at some points were 2 or 3 different wrong pronouns per sentence severely breaking up my reading enjoyment and even confusing me as to who was supposed to be saying what. I like the story though! Keep it up!
Recibe daño mental con solo leer esta historia está bueno todo eso lo del harem y su futura destreza sexual Pero esta lora me dejó un trauma mental espero que el autor se deshaga De esta maestra de secta bestia