I was really immersed in your story author the mystery really got me thinking.There are only a few mistakes I would like to address is about the setting since there isn't much description about the area and I'm still confused about what the characters look like. However you story is amazing keep it up
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Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
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Straight to the point this novel is trash. I really question peoples taste when this dumpster fire that seems like its a fanfic written by a teen gets above 4 stars. The premise of this novel seems decent in theory (even if it is a rip off of fairy tail and D&D). But the author is straight trash at writing even with a decent idea; the translators doing no favors either cause they are pretty bad too, not unreadable but enough to constantly take you out of the story. Anyways if you feel like reading this novel which is practically 90% exposition I won't stop you, but I don't take responsibility for any brain cells lost.
Great job ??Keep up the good work, more power to your elbow ❤️u200d?❤️u200d?
I went searching for a translation and found many that sounded like they were put through google translate. When I finally came across this one, I was blown away by the quality! It really feels like an official translation! Is there a reason that the updates have stopped for nine months? If you're taking time to translate the book, could you please let us know? As the book itself, I was completely blindsided by the first chapter. I never would have guessed such dark content would come from a book titled "Dumb Husky and His White Cat Shizun". Mo Ran turned me off quite a lot in the beginning, but as I see his character growth, I'm anticipating to see who he'll become. My favorite parts are when we get to see Chu Wanning's POV. It's absolutely heartbreaking (and I relate so hard). What a way to realize one's own self worth through seeing yourself in another character. I know, realistically, he'll get a happy ending, but I also know, realistically, that he'll suffer so much to get there. Mo Ran... please treat him well.The official release doesn't come until October where I am. I'd love to see an update and get a better grasp on the story before committing myself to buying it. (Money makes us all bearers of the curse) All other translations truly pale in comparison. Please let us know if you'll continue! Either way, thank you for the time and effort you put into this. It's really appreciated!
It's a shame this novel isn't more highly reviewed, because for a sign-in novel it is rather good. The MC isn't overpowered, he doesn't solely rely on the system, and things are actually happening to him rather than just around him as is the usual case.The distance between the MC and FMC makes sense, and the only stupid character is a minor one that appeared for one chapter.
I like it just one question will there be romance or wont all in all good story like mc wanna see what will become of this novel from what I read it will be good good job author
As im still fairly in the beginning StaGes of the story my review is a tad bit biast but thats beCause when the book was advertiSed as SomethinG i would like from the synopsis that was true. now why Biased? Well thats because low and behOld i didnt even know it Was the work from the same Author of aNOther novel i enjoy. and Im completely caught up on that One which i would definitely give 5 across the bOard.
absolutely worth the time to fap to and have fun. Read this before on machine sliced bread xyz it was fun then it is fun now . .
So let's be honest, this review isn't really here to explain anything or whatever, it's just for an additional 5 Star review. Consider dropping a good review for the honesty bros. Of course you can write a negative one, as long as you are constructive, although that would be hard before getting to at least 10 chapters...