Summer and Winter

So this story is very cool the premise is cool and the writing is good hence the score. But to balance that i'm going to tell you the only thing wrong with the story in my opinion. Everytime the author introduces anything or anyone in this world they give a 2 to 4 paragraph highschool essay about who that person is or what that object is the history of it ect.. I know your thinking thats not bad as it gives more background to the story but it's not always fictional things. Its real life things or real people that actually exist. Things that if we cared we could look up or things that we might already know. So this make the story needlessly long winded. like it's being padded for chapters just to make the story longer. everything else about the story is cool and very interesting but these unneeded long winded explanations slow the pace of the story so right after you get excited about something the MC is doing or is going to do. You get hit with a long explanation of how big a story The Hobbit is..... Like we don't know the hobbit is an amazing book that set up one of the greatest trilogies of books in history. This makes parts of the fanfic feel tedious and ruins fun or exciting parts of the fanfiction that could otherwise be enjoyed.

a good book that I have read on here hope it's get pick

First, let me congratulate the author for a job well done. The universe may have chosen to bless him, but it doesn't mean that he can have everything easily. The troubles he would face in his journey and the sense of mystery is good to read.Keep up the good work. :D

Only the first few chapters have been published at the time of this review so it might be too early to make strong statements, however I do have to admit that this novel is a pretty good read. It flows so smoothly which is done by the writing style of the author in which they manage to grasp your attention quickly and hold onto that until the very last sentence. I was surprised to see how quickly I read just the first chapter as with every word I read, I wanted to learn more and more. Definitely would recommend to anyone and everyone!

Hey y'all, this is so good!  (I have onlyread 48 chapters so far and I don't want it to ever end)You're so good, I didn't even see any grammar error or misspelled words. Keep it up author.

Hi, I am pretending I'm the OP system. Please be aware of weaklings in this story. If the character isn't constantly beating people above his level, he is not my main character. He will become so strong the gods will scratch their heads. "I made him," one might say. And then they will fight over him. This is all really unrealistic, and not cannon. However, I am OP! I might make the author write it! Actually... Sorry, author...