RedX43
Doing my best to make sure it's a memorable first novel
Isso é ntr ou netori?A
Exciting!!! I have read the first few chapters of this story and I found it to be intriguing. I used the audio reading and i enjoyed it. The plot and the setting is okay.Good job author ?
Honestly, this is amazing—fast-paced, exhilarating, the works! But seriously, why does he still call himself a shut-in reader when he's living a totally different life now? I’m literally going to cry if he pulls that card again in the future... Please, no more of that!And can we just appreciate how you never let go of character development? It’s honestly one of my favorite things about this story. Don’t forget to incorporate Seven and Seven, though! If you forget that seventh door leading from the seventh path in this seventh life, the seventh king might just send you through the seven gates of reincarnation… And I’m not sure any of us are ready for that.And of course, I can’t miss out on this part like every other reviewer... UPDATE MORE!!! Hehe, can’t wait for the next chapter!Honestly, if there was a 10-star rating, I’m pretty sure everyone here would give you a seven-star, even though you totally deserve 11! It’s like a weird time paradox where you’re just too good for the system to handle. Keep it up, you’ve got us all hooked!
Honestly, way better than I expected. I can see this novel becoming a top 50 novel in the future if it keeps its pace. Even when I first read Shadow Slave, it only had around 20 chapters and now it's consistently in first and I think this novel has the potential. While it's not completely original, no system novel is, however, this roleplay system seems very unique to me and an interesting take on the genre. I also often am surprised at the authors choices and in fact proud that she or he can avoid common tropes and mistakes. I am looking forward to this novel growing. It has potential, don't ruin it author or drop it. I will hunt you down.
Strong female lead check ?Grey male lead check?Interesting storyline check?Hooking twist and plot check?Supporting side characters check?This book has every elements that you are searching for??My suggestion: do not skip this masterpiece???
nice book worthy reading , keep it up dia
I love this book it's very fun read and writing with ease and perfection in a way that's not complex to understand.Good writing qualities tooThanks for sharing author.
OKAY! I've finally decided to do the tradition. If you guys have any concerns about this fic, just reply/comment here and I'll DEFINITELY reply to you. anyway, thanks for reading guys! love love <3
I was warned but didn’t listen? the quality of the trial read books seem to have gotten worse and worse and now my expectations have dropped.
Although the sudden marriage, getting pregnant and separation is a bit cliche, I’m still interested in this story. I want to know how the twins ended up separated (I’m assuming they were) and ended up with each parent. I also like that the FL doesn’t seem to be a pushover. Hope this gets picked.
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