love this kind of story can't wait to read mire chapter . for now duty first reading later
Alright, I just finished reading your latest chapter, and here's what I think:Firstly, can't lie, it's excellent—on par with what you'd expect from a seasoned author. The pacing is tight, the character arcs are progressing naturally, and the tension in the plot feels earned rather than forced. However, I think the main character is taking his situation way too lightly. He is in a forest full of monsters, which could easily kill him. To add to that, he doesn't know anything about the forest he is lost and his helper, his phone, is all but reliable. Yet, somehow someone who chad alled himself a coward isn't freaking out much and can still think straight with an intelligence of average seen from his status.Secondly, he never had a point where he broke down or reflected on his past life. It wasn't like he had no one—his sister was still alive before he transmigrated; however, he never once thought about it.And lastly, I'm really enjoying the book, as such It feels off trying to find holes in such a good book so I'd stop here also I hope to see more in the upcoming chapters.--
I am try to read this book because of reviews. But after reading some chapters I’m already love it ❤️❤️❤️
very fun novel to read i like the world building very much
Amazing writing, well-developed characters, and interesting plot twists that won't let you put the book down. If you are familiar with the same author's other works, you can expect a great story from the get-go. Give it a try and you won't regret it!
after reading few chapters so far I like the story lines,plot,character .
Why did your former book get banned?????
One of the best blue lock fanfic I've read
so the problem is author make it kinda annoying while battle like 1vs1 every chapter always change pov, and is not even make any progress just another yapping, and same cycle happened
And suddenly the purple potion that after being mixed with the yellow potion turned into a dark black color.
"I'm tired, lets just go to home."
interesting when read chapter 1, hope it can be continue finish, not be continued like some book if must pay a special reading ?