A shameless five-star review from this author.Knowing how bad my debut was with this book, I have decided to write a redo of the book with not just what I want to write, but with what readers actually want to read. If You're a fan of insanely overpowered MCs who try to act weak in the eyes of the public, hide within secretive organizations, and create a group that rivals the world, then this is for you. Don't get me wrong though, this won't be a rip off of the eminence in shadows. There will be an actual show of the MC's growth in power, reasonable female leads, and a good cause for action throughout the story, Aka plot. It depends on what you look forward to, but know that this isn't a sm*t story, nor will I be writing shitty snu snu.If you're tired of the standard Harem genre, then do give this a try, I believe you would forget about the fact that it's even a harem once you get immersed in the story.
A great read with excellent character and world building, story progression is a bit slow at the moment but I understand it's due to setting up for future events. Over all a solid start and I can't wait to see how it progresses.
looks like a promising story read only 5 chapter like it so far
Listen if you want your story to ebcome better you have to fix it yourself and read everyone’s comment. I might sugar coat this, but many people would not and have no reason to because you chose to put this novel up unless you figure out how it fails it will keep failing. just a comment hope you can understand
Good strong, has a slow first chapter but gets really interesting very quickly. Props to the author on this novel, it different in its own way.
the best sports novel translation on the app for sure
I really like stories with strong overpowered female leads, and this book is indeed to justice. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
good stuff, netoris pretty funnyoverall fun read
well, this is a good novel.but I just wish the author could stop lazing about and update more chapters for readers
Hey author, I have a question. I just read Seraphina’s chapter description and it said that she loves being around Lumina so i was wondering if their relationship was purely platonic meaning a close non-romantic, and non-sexual relationship or is it some complicated love triangle between the three where lumina loves mc while Seraphina loves lumina (i hope not)
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Excitedly, all of Goku's friends ran over to the crater that the pod had created and watched carefully as Goku stepped out of the pod. Gohan and Gonan smiled giddily and jumped into the crater, running to their father that they hadn't seen in two and a half years. Future Gonan only looked at him, not moving from her spot at the edge of the crater next to Trunks.