Decent, to be honest, but would probably be better without the 100x multiplication system.
For now this Looks really well but then again this a new type of take on the two world traveler genre. so Far iT is entertaining. Hopefully this gets picked.
One word “amazing” it’s really good that’s all I can say because I suck at writing stuff but its really good
What's it's real name ?
Honestly, I enjoy reading novels of individuals being transmigrated into the bodies of animals as their quite interesting. However, this novel is just garbage. The protagonist is reborn as a python, and gains a system (as usual), and devours everything within his path. As a result, within the first 30 chapters, he becomes powerful to the extent he is impervious to bullets, has high regeneration, and very potent poison. Story:The whole plot of the novel is disgusting. The protagonist was killed by his fellow co-workers (around 16 people) (including his brother who tries to rape his girlfriend) to take hide their terrible acts I presume. Character:He eats humans within the first 30 chapters. The author doesn't really explain the process of how he forgoes the process of knowingly eats humans. But I'm guessing as he's a python, his animalistic instincts take over. World:Modern world but primarily focused on the island. I wasted my time reading this.
Fairly decent novel if you ask me, somewhat confusing start but things are explained later on in novel. Good novel Good novel Good novel Good novel
Teenage awkwardness, just the way I like it.Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over can't fix. Prose is good, and dialogue flows naturally. Might want to flesh out some of the single line dialogue IMO, just to give it a bit more spice.Keep on writing, I want more of this. ?
Yeah, so i had to shamelessly give myself another review but this time i gave myself 5stars.the last review i gave myself had a low rating because i had just started writing and to be honest i didn't have any confidence in my wirting. I know that i can delete it, but my first critic came as a reply under my review, so i am very reluctant in deleting it.Although my confidence has increased, i am still a learner in this aspect.and just to add a little something, a little over-view of MC's character. A lot of people critic it saying that he was described to be apathetic and then later on he started acting like an 11 year old ..yes he was apathetic and he acts childish now, and there is a logical reason for that ( I can't say the reason because i feel like i would be dropping a spoiler.) After coming to the new world he realized something that he never knew. if you want to know what then read the book...Thank you ??...signed: shameless/crazy author...
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how can the main character be like that , what the story writer is thinking even if the mc wants money he can't say everything to others like that when they ask , atleast a few secrets should be kept to mc himself . how can he say about the assasination league with that shitty bitch when she asked , does he even had a brain , i don't like the story writer..............
Hiya, this is an amazing story but it was stopped. Kindly bring it back because Soul land 3 is about to end...I hope to see it continue soon. I'm mainly on Webnovel because of TJSS books?