At first 100 chapters it's good the plot is nice but when it comes to 100+ the novel become slow it's is already 100 chapters yet he still doesn't solve the protagonist (Xiao) and in the 100+ chapters everything is only about the travel of Lin fan having dinner with his parents visiting her girlfriend nothing else it's getting boring and one more thing it's not like a villain at all more like Xiao is the villain here
Common grammatical errors, that author refuses to fix, stating no one is paying him to fix them so he wont. I cant force him to fix it, but i can give a bad review
Fun lazy mc slow life so far I like
oThis took my imagination to the next level. I can imagine every description written in my head. Looking forward to how you will end this story!?
great fanfic mc with nagatos power is incredible making him seek peace is like we have a real nagato in mha which isnt bad its a great idea and that the omni potent god is going to send 3 naruto characters there is a fantastic idea would be funny to see his reaction later. it is great how that you dont follow the plot so you can use your own ideas. all in all it is a fantastic fanfix??
I love everything From his simple antics with nao and shu to the romance that develops later onFrom the one kick "fights" to )the actual fights against stronger cultivatorsFrom the slight overshadow on the early chapters to the massive world on later onesThe caracter development as well is amazingOnly complaint...It doesn't upload chapters every second
Good fan_fic with potential ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
thanks for the new update..............very nice novel ????❤❤❤❤❤???????????????????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤???
As i already said in some comment chapter if you can go past the Stupid MC and his slow growth then you will enjoy this novel but for me when you write a novel it's about MC and the development of the stories to support him but here their not that just a good storirmes with a trash MC if someone can go past chapter 20 he can make a review and tell me what he think of this MC because even if author said he want to build MC character ut destroy the enjoy of the storie because all you do is reading a stories with no good MC so how can the stories advance at the end make your own idea if you can past chapter 9 and not insult him then you are strong but it's not for me waste of time .And me who was expecting a MC not OP but no so trash i am utterly crushed.