The author is a cool dude, he did a good job on the content of the book and created something that can be read with pleasure. I can only wish you good luck and hope for new chapters
I haven't read this yet. I am going to though. What I want to know is what the author envisions of the MC. What does he wish the MC's goal to be, and what things the MC requires to do to reach said goal.
How beautifully well written!!??
Just amazing!! ?
Kuddos to you for writing such good story ?
Hoping to read more chapters
Best wishes to you?
typical_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ meaning ~ just like every novel with the same theme and concept, this one is a bit messy or maybe just the translation or the way it is hard to distinguish ~ thoughts, systems or the verbal musings of the MC and characters around him.
I'm beginning to think that the reason the raws are being hidden and the source material modified to Americanized versions is because webnovel and by extension Qidan doesnt have the rights to these novels they are uploading from other platforms for these specific novels and thus do so not to get taken to court by their authors or get contested for the rights for these books, they really may not even own rights to these novels they are translating and are scamming.
This novel is pretty good with a prudent MC. Although he is good but not naive. Isn't arrogant and knows what to do in a troublesome situation, knows when to bow his head and knows when to shut his mouth. It's actually a quality rarely seen in 'MC' generally. The world building goes in depth and even shows how fruit seller markets work. The important side characters that I've seen till now do have different personalities and have differences. Butler, maids, his friend, etc. Try first 10-15 chapters, I'm pretty sure you'll like it.And yeah, MC doesn't look like a skirt chaser yet.
This had potentially to be a pretty interesting novel with a unique idea. Unfortunately, it's been completely ruined by poor grammar, poor dialogue and poor everything, only thing good was the concept.First of all, this author has attempted to copy dialogue from all the chinese novels out there. They've failed badly; it's clear the author has never even had a proper conversation with a fellow human being. The grammar is awful, the interactions are just awkward and they try so hard to sound profound but the author doesn't know what they're typing so it just sounds stupid. The author has tried to make the MC talk like how an elder in let's say a cultivation novel talks, sounding profound and all except it doesn't here, it just sounds stupid because it makes no sense and it's filled with bad grammar. Even without the grammar issues, the phrases don't flow well anyways so it doesn't matter.It's obvious the author spent a bit of time looking over the first chapter and then started speedrunning through the rest without proofreading or editing.
I have to start off this review saying this books writing quality, is impeccable! Perfect spelling so far, no grammatical errors. However the one criticism I have over writing is description.Description is good, but when there's to much of it, it gets out of hand and leaves nothing to the imagination. Besides that I love the description over the characters, they seem so beautiful, and likable so far as well. Certain areas are confusing as to whether it's a flashback or current time. So besides that this book is pretty epic this far and I'd suggest it to anyone who's looking for an assassin like story with elemental background!
I stumble onto this story and decided to give it a try and I just reached chapter 46. Tbh, until that chapter I haven't feel the hook. The story is quite interesting but the character is a lil plain and I haven't feel the attachmant to the characters. I only read until chapter 46 but there's already too much character that I already forgot half of it (mostly about their characteristic). I wish it'll get better in the next chapter. But overall it's a good read especially because there's already a lot of chapter.
Best ongoing novel on this site right now. I am at chapter 179 and cant wait for more. Storyline, MC, character development, cliff hangers - all top notch
I gave it a try since it had some good reviews. Overall a good story but there is too many ocs because its set in the future. That makes it hard for me to care about anything after the highschool arc. I think that if you had set the story in the past it wouldve have been more interesting but thats personnal preference. Overall Great main character and if you like ocs and dont care about being familiar with the players he will play against this story is for you but not for me.
First of all the writing quality is pretty solid.The updating stability need more time to be certain but at the moment it is great.The story development feels great, it didn’t appear to be rushed or without planning.The character design can be explored more deeply, but the story just started.The world background is great, because it is our world.