I have ridden till ch 10 and from what I have ridden I can say that this story is pretty interesting and good.I liked the way how you describes the world and the characters.I also liked the MC as he is kinda op and cool and not dumb as in other novels.But I would like to say that you should work on world-building.Overall this novel is pretty good and intresting.
A really great read! I was really immersed with its world and how the characters feel they're real and alive—even though they're uh quite the opposite within the context of the story lol—after-alive rather lmao. The updates slowing down though is unfortunate, hopefully the author's doing well and taking the time to take care of themselves. Hoping as well they won't give up on this, because really, it's a great read. Keep up the good work!
The storyline so far, (chapter 12) it's great. I will try to see more of it and The Novel, it's well written and it makes the readers to be captivated by the story. I hope that everything would end up in a happy ending. I recommend for those who are into these kind of novels. You'll not gonna be disappointed.
The premise of this story is captivating and original with lots of potential to be expanded in both past and future. Would love to find out how exactly the Mediterranean man got into the Tsarievich feet in the first place. The writing is well balanced, alternating between descriptions of the historical landscape at the time and concise and easy to read narration.
There aren’t many reviews listed, so I’ll take the plunge.This is pretty great! It definitely has a lot of potential. I’ve read up to the current max, and I can confidently say this has the makings of one of the top novels here. That being said, I’d recommend waiting until there are about 500 chapters released. Personally, I love reading 100+ chapters in one go, but the story’s pacing feels SO slow due to the extensive world-building (some would also just say filler) up until chapter 50. The chapters themselves are also relatively short (at least to me), so take that as you will.
I love the story and the fact that it is free readingg?Pls keep updating
I wanted to like this. The author appears to be good at writing and has some creative ideas, but 1 the world just never developed.. it’s some sort of school but the teachers and school layout not only make no sense, they break the suspension of disbelief. I’m pretty sure a school, even a magic school can’t be run the way it’s written. Add to that a mysterious main char where all you get are a bunch of disjointed flashbacks to sort of give you an idea of who he is and you find a guy you just can’t relate to which was the finishing touch for me. Maybe it gets better somewhere in the thirtieth chapter or so, but I’ll never know cause I have lost all interest in looking further.I’ve often heard that you only have a paragraph or 2 to interest someone in reading your book. And a couple of chapters to get them hooked enough to read to the end. Took way to long and if this starts to be a book you need to pay to open chapters, it won’t work cause you don’t hook them before the paywall.Good luck with your next try
This book RUINED me (in the best way possible). It’s terrifying and beautiful at the same time?? Like I laughed, cried, and screamed all in one chapter. Every chapter makes your heart beat faster and the writing makes you feel like you're THERE. Totally worth reading, 1000/10
I've read to chapter 56 so far and gotta say books like this are why I love reading, AI's, funny but strong mcs, zerg like aliens and wars. doing a great job with the story keeping it fun and interesting while still building the world and keeping the characters progressing. I hope to be able to keep reading til the end. P.S. looking forward to when it's even more crazy wars.
Oh!, what a fantastic read, this sci-fi masterpiece blends mind-bending technology with heart-pounding adventure, leaving you breathless and yearning for more with every page.
THIS GIVES ME A S.A.O vibe! well planned plot so far, read 10 chapters and I'm elated because to a person who loves the stimulation of graphic and visual imagery, its pretty good to kill time and kinda help yourself dissolve into it, the only thing is i wish your character had some flawsss because that would create more realisticity you get me? short chapters, easy read, not a too complex world build (towards the beginning as far as I've read), the cover disappoints tho because its ambiguous to the content of the book pretty mmuchhhh.... the author has unused potential, could write better definitely has the ability just wondering why its very brief in a few chappies, nevertheless, looking forward to read AHEAD CHAPTER 10 TO UNLOCK MORE!
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