Interesting plot, looking forward for more updates
This is interesting! Because of the writing style I felt it light and was able to read easily and steadily which added more points to the story! It also consists of interesting twist! Though to be honest, though it's just my opinion, I would like to make the writing style more vivid and descriptive. That's just my opinion though but the writing style is already fine because it fits with the storyline
SO good! Enjoying this story (I binged today all available chapters and yearning for more!!!), characters are likable, and I’m ready for more! I’ve enjoyed all this author’s books, and this one does not disappoint. ❤️
At the time of this review, there are only 31 chapters. From what has been released so far, I can say a great idea and story. Now with only 30+ chapters there's not been a super ton of plot development. However, what has happened is detailed, thought out, interesting, and enjoyable. The characters are diverse, and realistic. The author is blending sci-fi, fantasy(my opinion), dystopian, supernatural, and cultivation into a piece of art. The only flaw I can see at this time is that the Levels or Ranks are not full defined yet. We get a general view but it is still unclear at this time. I expect as the story progresses that this aspect will become clear, but at this point it is still muddy. This is something that might bother new readers coming into this story. Having said that, it really doesn't matter this early in the story because of everything else that is happening. TRY. If you do anything else just try the story. If you give it a chance you'll find yourself emersed into a captivating world. You have nothing to lose by trying. This author is a incredible story teller that will suck you in and not let go. This is purely my opinion. Try and decide for yourself if it is worth it or not. Thanks for giving us this gift of a story.
This story has a lot of potential. Hope mc doesn’t get svaed by others ajd strives to achive power and eternal life
i just left it here author, this novel is better NTR novel than your last one
Lol sry for this but i don't like mc like this it just I'm not able to read more than 8 chapters sry for review but I don't like mc who struggle even with a system
Oohhh the synopsis brothers. Those are my typa stories. Will be reading this on my spare time
Mmm, Well the story is interesting, but I still think it needs some development in some areas. I will wait till it has more chapters.
initially I found the title interesting so i decided to give it a go after reading the free chapters I realized that this novel is amazing altho the main character is op it says such in the intro and if you're not into that it's perfectly fine but if you are it's a great pick only issue i found was that some lines aren't fully correct which is fine since there's not much of those mistakes which is why my overall review is a 4.8 chapters keep coming and it's great if you're reading this give it a go you'll most likely like it
I would like to say right off the bat this is a well written story despite only having four chapters. They know what they want this story to be and the characters feel real enough to have emotions for their plight. It has an old fashion Japanese setting. I can tell by their writing style this isn't their first rodeo and I am impressed with how vivid the descriptions are. I want to wish the author goodluck as they keep approaching this series. Respectfully Mirai asked me to move this comment over so I am doing so ^^
This novel is good.But Man... there are lots of misunderstandings in this novel. Worst one was chapter 317. Why did do this author?? I mean seriously??I hope you will resolve it and handle it properly. I would be annoying if misunderstandings spawn because of this one. Besides, you have already created a cockroach(Mastermind behind mc's murder).