Even at reading the 7th chapter, I know it's a good one. I'd hoped we'd get the sequel to Alanor but now it's happening and I'm so excited.
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This is the most dramatic thriller ever, such horrors that some children have to face is awful. Hope the world gets better.Trigger Warning.
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I haven't actually read this, but given that this author has 2 other novels that he didn't bother to finish and didn't even warn his readers if he was just taking a break through the comment section or an additional chapter idk if it is safe to start reading this since he might just drop it out of nowhere without mentioning anything.Aside from that the synopsis looks interesting so I'll probably give it a try anyway. If the author keeps posting chapters without dropping this and the story is good I'll edit my review and score later.
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Hello you, yes you, the lost and curious readers who have stumbled or been guided here.
This is my third novel and entree to WSA2022, so I welcome and thank all for the support this novel can get.
This isn’t an official review of my novel so just treat it as a Q&A area. I’ll do my best to answer all of your questions (without spoilers)
Very good novel, I personally havent noticed any writing mistakes, the story is developing very well, the chracters are all interesting(imo), and the world background is good.
The story contains something i would refer to as female pedophilia. The main character was a former special forces soldier but got reincarnated into an 8-year-old child with a Wilderness Survival System. He attracted a lot of attention as a child being capable of many things but that also includes ADULT FEMALES! As i was reading this i felt disgusted that someone would write about an adult having thoughts on an 8-year-old child. Yes, true he was an adult in mind but body vice he was still a child. One 28-year-old female actress named Scarlett had clear thoughts of wanting to be with him even as he is. Here i sit thinking about their 2 decade gap in age.For those who gain interest in this novel please reconsider and think back on whether or not you would feel comfortable reading such things. I only felt uncomfortable and that was my only emotion. I don't think its a bad story but the content really is too much, this doesn't necessarily mean that no one would like to read this novel but i just can't finish it.
Although the growth of his harem is still a bit too fast. At least, the women have their own back stories. Overall, this rewrite is much better than the original version.
It's an interesting story.I especially enjoyed the competition between 'Young Masters'.Although the translation sometimes leaves on feeling frustrated over the flow of the story it does meet the passing standard.
I like the way author continue to write a good plot and listening to the suggestion of the readers.The words on chapters are now longer and thanks for that.