Elyon
Thugs are going to get interesting as you go along... but in a heavily political way where America (sorry "Sunset Empire")'s top tech owners amd it's ambassadors, reporters attitude and mannerisms are ripped straight out of a Xantia, the evil overloard template. I mean they are possibly not the greatest people, but easily angered narcissistic neanderthals is the default (& so far only) template.Also the retaliation event later on. I don't think the MC whom is considered a genius by that time (or the author), considers what happened in hospitals, doctor's offices and similarly sensitive infrastructure, this is not a good guy by any means(though he is painted as such).
Beautiful and want more the writing and the details are to the poi and don’t leave me confused and annoyed love this!
Oh God, you've set up the perfect plot with neglect and betrayal. It kind of reminds me of fanfiction but done right. I love how overpowered Noboru is; he's definitely outerversal. I can't wait to see how Noboru humbles his siblings and puts Kaito Danzo in his place, as well as his parents.
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Well i like it. The fact that he takes time. To learn stuff what kept me reading that's all I want to say but looks like u need to 144 char at least . I think this is it see ya
Filled with grammatical errors. Probably MTL copy paste. Only updating stability is the good point of this novel.????????????????????????
Great novel. Have fun reading it. The author has done a good job as you wont find mistakes while reading it.
honestly incredibly tough to read. very stereotypical and constant use of the f bomb. the dialogue needs alot of work and the grammar isn't great either. I feel like it borrows from several other novels line vampire system and bloodline system and just does it poorly
I’v read the authors other books, and with how good those were, I think I’ll be sticking around. I’m not sure if I’ll like it, but it’s worth a try
Great potential, horrible writing. The names make no sense, the way the characters act doesn't make sense, and how much time passes in the story isn't explained at all. The author could have make a really good story, but it's rushed and made into something that is hard to read.
The novel was really good at first until you get farther down the chapter where their are useless girls by his side where he becomes a beta
Terror infinity/infinity armament/Ultimate evolution type of novel. Good overall. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
