I thought my guy had given up after that incident but this shows his determination as a writer, his narration and vocabulary even improved out of no where! such a chad
INITIAL THOUGHTS:-Ive recently caught up again with the chapters I stockpiled and decided that I wanted to give potential readers a window view of this great novel.WRITING QUALITY:-The short answer is Top Quality.-The longer answer is the author has done a great job of keeping the writing understandable using proper grammar structure which for what I call “Original Authors” is something that doesn’t always happen. When this novel plateform first started and for most of it’s inception afterwards you’ve had Chinese authors hiring translators who have a high level of English proficiency. This lead to a quality of content most of us readers got used to and only really noticed with new authors exploded on the platform. Overall 5/5.UPDATING STABILITY:-Consist from beginning to now. Averaging 1 a day or 7 a week it’s much better then many authors who seem to burn out after releasing at least twice that amount. Overall 5/5.STORY DEVELOPMENT:-Anyone who has read a fair amount of novels knows that their isn’t one universal story development. We read many decent to masterful stories with varying plots. What we do know even if we can’t put it into words is when a story progresses badly. This novel happens to fall into the great category.-The Main Character (MC) is transported to a cultivation world with many underlying mysteries that accompany his beginning. Most of the time we stick with the MC seeing his progress while at times be shown other characters that add to the overall world in a way that connects to the MCs progress now or in the far future. This is great for a number of reasons -One is how plot points are not only made in the short term, but also in the long term making many events that were a mystery unfold naturally. So while some plot points seem too distant to connect at first get gradually uncovered showing there deep implications. Two many people introduced in different factions and power levels are having a major effect on the story developing in ways we have yet to understand.-Overall I see great things for the story now and later. 5/5.CHARACTER DESIGN:-Short answer again is great.-The MC is positioned in the world as someone within and outside of it. Living a life as a human before and a demon now is taking the best of both worlds so he becomes someone who can make a impact. Ruthless and kind. Distant to some close to others. Prideful yet humble enough to recognize his faults. One of my top MCs.-Close characters are multi dimensional showing there support for the MC and the greater story development. Slowly but surely we see a group form around the MC each bringing color to what could have been a solitary life. I don’t want to give spoilers, but I’ll say that 2 females closest to the MC each bring out more sides to each other’s character development. Overall 5/5.WORLD BACKGROUND:-Deep and mysterious. The MC is slowly unveiling through his exploration what seems to be a complicated world. Many races known like Demons, humans, and dragons while many more briefly mentioned. Also various Apex wars that have happened for reasons unknown. The list goes on and on leaving wanting more. Overall 5/5.
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it's interesting and good . I have already add this in my library
Starts off good, but slowly just gets more and more trashy. I'm not going to go too into detail because I don't care enough, but it's worth a read if you have nothing else to read, but definitely wouldn't be one of my go to novels.
The potion has a shiny gold color and shines like all other potion.
Hah, human world, what a wonderful world? If i can go to the human world thats will be awesome....
But there is a new fact, that there is cyanide-lvl max in coffee, this poison is very dangerous because it can caused people turned to toxid child desease just like a human.
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"Away from everyone else..." she then walked a bit aways from the rest of the group, making sure to stay out of earshot as Piccolo followed. "You already know who I am," she began, turning towards Piccolo, still avoiding looking at him. "So let's just get to the point... that kid I came here with, his name is Trunks. Vegeta and Bulma's kid who will be born in roughly two years, so you obviously can't tell anyone about him. He's good, been helping me with the threat that we came here to warn you about..."
"It's complicated-" the teenaged beside her began, but was immediately interrupted by the Namekian.