Freespiritknight
Awesome I really enjoyed It ????. Especially how it explains the reason why the ruler returned. Never actually thought about it. The author makes it soo interesting. Definitely will recommend it ????.
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Great plot and exceptional writing, as a big fan of evolution type novels, I personally give this a thumbs up I only the quality keeps up.[and no this was not a bot review this is my real honest opinion ]p.s when are you doing your mass release ??
The book is great and I noticed one thing, the author must love animals. This is the second book in reading that included animals, I love the author's writing style, so different from what I'm used to seeing. Please keep up the good work, gonna add this to library.
I recommend trying this novel. It is well written with good grammer and no grammatical mistakes I can easily spot out.The world background is described vividly and fits so well into the story. the Main Character can seem immature at times but considering his age it's 100% valid and not out of place. it's a slow progress in the main Characters growth but nothing to put anyone off in reading the novel. All side characters shows Character growth and are not there only to boost up the main characters image or strength. This shows the Author put serious work and thought into his novel.This novels update stability is excellent easily earning a 5/5 from me. Each chapter released building on from the past and now having any plot holes even with the fast releases.Like I said originally I recommend you give this novel a try as it takes a different approach to young master novels. The mc isn't weak or ridiculed at the beginning of the novel with him having to grow stronger to prove himself. It's more relaxing and enjoyable. one of the reasons I really enjoy reading this hidden gem ?. Keep it up Author-san ?
Was really good and well done for the first 15 chapters then out of nowhere turns into a absolute clichefest MC turns into an idiot a hole and he's commended for it. Must of been one hell of an asshole in his previous life don't think he had no friends due to his while revenge more his hidden arrogance.
In the words of someone it's another world MC can talk a train at two cause it fits for that world but can speak a language for which he doesn't even knows exist to many holes god it's such a shame was really well done for a while will continue an hope it gets better again
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FYI, Its a bery Dark novel with a pure evil MC. A stroy about a broken soul aspiring to become a god. The journey starts with our MC, Who’s fooled by a “Different World System”, And is taken to a low magic world where the system gets the MC killed to get his Protagonist Halo. The dead MC’s broken soul wakes up but also looses his humanity. To survive and become strong he becomes “Negary” god of Misfortune and is no longer “Wang Yuan” the human boy. Follow his journey as the poor broken soul no longer differentiates between good and evil and just believes in strength. It’s Somewhat like reverend insanity but here he is doing all of it just too make himself A god, Not because he has too but because he wants too. As one of the reviewers stated The MC here is a complete opposite of “Klien” from Lotm who’s whole purpose was to maintain his humanity while becoming a god, Here He lets go of everything to become a god. The world background is great and has a lot of depth. The character development is also very logical, You can practically see how he changes unlike most of the novel where there is so called character development of him becoming “Mature” for “Immature”. It’s a really dark novel. Good read for people who want Evil MC.
Very good novel. Good grammar, good story, good character development. An evil MC, a manipulator, calm MC. Please try to read if you like MC with these characteristics
