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It's good!! A little slow, a lot of plots and plots, but I really liked.
MC is extremely intense and always in the shadow of the light hero, while other characters are always doing everything with girls, our intense MC acts like a complete *d**t by acting homosexually, frankly, MC is like a 3-year-old child.
Hi. As a an author trying to establish his/her foothold in this vast ocean, you really did a good job. So far the OP ness of the MC is just right up my alley. It is not too much but rather, just the right amount of spice. I hope that you van incorporate some famous phrases or lines from anime characters to add a bit of comical humor. Like adding condiments to your food. Also, I hope the range of skills and powers is not limited to those used for fighting. Like with other MCs being well versed with 2 or 3 other things (the usual alchemy, forging, formation, etc.) All in all. Its a good story to read. I gave 4 on Story Development for now since I cannot grasp yet where the story is leading too (unless you meant the MC to just be OP on the storyline w/ no setbacks). We look forwars to more chapters. It's a damn good read.
Clearly, I'm heavily influenced by editing this novel ;p Still, I had to make a review since I'm a harcc0re fellow reader xD I've been working on the novel since the very start, you can say it's my editing baby. Along with it, I'm growing up too, and striving to improve. Let's get things straight; it's not your every day post-apocalyptic novel, you won't find too gruesome scenes like other novels of its kind. Several times, the MC looks like a NPC game character, he's not that talkative but that's what makes him special. He just shows things through his actions, he knows he is weak and he strives to improve. Some people may not like his decisions, but it's still being elaborated why he didn't do something. Some people complain about the short chapters, I on the other hand, not because I have to work less - on the contrary I have to work more to rephrase some lines in order to make the reader 'feel' what's taking place, prefer that the chapters are smaller cause they're not that repetitive and you hardly want to skip lines (once again that's how I feel, you may have other opinions.) I will agree that it resembles dbz fights, but you can still wait for it to pile up and binge read it later, at least that's what I do with most novels ;p Last but not least, I find the concept really intriguing. I mean, a car that can be constantly upgraded? What will it become next, an air-carrier, a spaceship, a Transformer, Gundam, Power Rangers' Megazord? There are plenty of choices ;p That's all I had to say till this point, if anything changes I'll update ;p Thank you for your feedback and your support for the novel ^_^
P.S. The updating stability is top-notch, we haven't missed a chapter ;p
It's the normal four elements and spirit
19 of the 23 volume of the novel
Bro just accepted it ☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️
I love this novel but the only thing I don't approve of is the system that rewards based on bonuses or ranks instead of doing it in my opinion based on the mc power / opponent power ratio.
damn i liked this, sad it got dropped, anyone know any novels similar to this where the mc builds a world??
It's really annoying. When a girl rejects a guy, she deserves better, but when a man rejects a girl, he's an a hole. To be honest, it's really infuriating, a man chasing a girl for 13 years would be called an obsessive creepy guy, but when a girl does, it became an undying persistence and loyalty for love. I freaking hate it, just because you like someone, it gives you every right to interfere with their life? Just because you like someone for so many years, they should reciprocate? It's a twisted logic that I can't accept, it's just so unreasonable.
I think this novel is not bad. I'm already read half about 400 plus chapter. Can someone tell me novel title which Ning Yu as FL. I think I had read it before just can't remember which one.
