Veer smiled and said "Yes. You got it." And then he looked toward Priya and said "And you my wife! Now we are ready to clear your doubt. In a mortal world, blessings or curses apply to those who have a mortal body and it works on the body and then soul through it. A soul cannot be blessed or cursed because it has no mortal identity."
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Review after 163 chapters.I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated.Nothing to say about the updates.The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic.The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful.In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily.Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly.The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations.Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected.To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.
This is a good story especially all the plots and characters good reviews
The novel is good and no harem which make it more good along with league of legends! I read the review and Idk what to say to them....... their review is somehow stupid for me.
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I'm confused by the fact theres the reincarnation tag, will the mc die and be reincarnated in the apocalypse or hurt his head and get memories from a previous life or something?,i know its only 3 chapters in and im on the first one by the time I type this im just curious
Writing quality: good grammar. Easy to read.Story development: A lot of action so far. Fast paced. Unlike the other stories, this story has an episodic feel to itCharacter design: lacks some depth to characters so far. It's like stock characters almost.Updating Stability: daily update of 1 chapterWorld background: can't tell so far
The story is not bad, I'm on chapter 14 and I still can't understand several things.For example, he is in an academy protected by a great mutant, but some policemen with a robot decide to attack them, I don't understand the thought of trying to defeat such a powerful mutant with policemen.Second, apparently it's normal to kill each other at school, I don't know if it's a satire of the United States or what.Third, a student is able to infiltrate an intelligent humanoid beast capable of murdering students, let's remember that we are in a school with powerful mutants.Fourth, upon "dying" he wakes up in a Battle Royale, and apparently an administrator tries to kill him for no reason, which is then turned into an MMORPG-like game.And that I'm only going for chapter 14.I think the story has potential, but it needs to correct several things.
one of the best ones ive read. i really enjoyed the opening arc. i wish the author would continue with this story. ill keep checking back periodically and looking forward to more.
When is the author going to start updating again really like this funny novel. Can anybody recommend good novels to read I can’t find good one.
only one element are you serious and its fire come on trash trash trash . mmmgddffdddfffggdghgghgghggghhgghhhhhhgggggghhhggggggggggggggghhggg