its decent but u can tell it was written by an amateur the first 10 chapters were ok but his family felt inhumane in a way ur son just woke up from a hospital and u just left.... and u could tell it copied from tapov and the dream he had about the future was like tapov too and felt misplaced if u are tryna build suspense and act mysterious dont give so much info in one dream in the first 20 chapters the fights were insanely fast but in the physical assesment they were long ash and boring i guess every character seems so fake like ren he got close to the mc so fast its insane add some realism to these interactions also it has so much useless monolouge it completely ruins any fight that gets u excited
first time writing a review. but this book is definitely worth reading with one hand:). so far 24 chapters are out. I just sent 17 golden tickets. author if possible don't stop posting new chapters. one thing I noticed that kills alot of books is that the authors give up since books don't get power stones or golden tickets.
expecting better than before and I hope you can finish it this time Really appreciate ur effort.
Anticipating more chapters amigo. Keep up the good work?
Author is a master of suspense, no doubt. The way he writes and describes scenes is just terrific. Good work, author. This is a story worth reading
The beginning of the book was nothing less than poetry itself. Descriptive writing will force you to imagine things you have never thought about. Like a cherry on the top the grammar is perfect as well. Hope this reaches the target audience
it is a very good and interesting book to read
interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.
hey bro can u update Rebirth: Li Clan's Immortal Path in webnovel bro from random translator web coz I don't have money bro ?? but iIguess your machine is truly good
The plot is very interesting and the World Background is very good. Stability of updates is equally good. Character Design is good in respect of the 3-4 characters I have come across up to the 5th chapter.A few more dialogues in each chapter is what people had advised me and I am passing on the same here as well as shorter paragraphs.Writing quality is good a few typos and mixing of tenses which do not disturb the flow of the story.All the best.
I very much appreciate the simplicity of the writing. Especially dialogue between characters. It’s not too fleshed out or too bare. And it’s pretty nice to the eyes. Especially the mc who is actually cool, and not generic for once.
Talk about a lady with a Sailor's mouth. A girl from the militaray who's expertise in ancient and modern/western medicine and surgery transmigrated in the ancient times as a divorced woman with a child who has an extra flesh on his jaw and was despised by his Fathers' family. The girl left the fam and discovered that she was a member of a century yr ols medical family and her grandfather left her a medical hall. I am thinking that she would not be getting back with her ex as the guy was fancied by the emperors' daughter so I am looking forward as to who she would be marrying in the end. hoping for the raws too. luv ya girlies!