Very good story, I like the world of Xiang Bei.
This was GOOD!Good MC development, the world is interesting, and I immediately added it to my Library!The world of the MC shattered like glass... He lost his friend and family... and I felt it!Keep up the hard work, Author! It's worth it!!! :D
Novel com uma boa proposta e um tema interessante, apesar da criação de jogos e as reações sobre os mesmo a novel consegue manter um certo de interessante que prende o leitor com um desenvolvimento divertido de ler é um sistema mundial com alguma lógica e sentido o que torna mais imersivo a leitura do leitor em geral um 4,5 de 5
I don’t understand why the villain has to get together with every heroine. It’s ridiculous. Update more.
Is there romance in this?? I can see the potential. Luna and mc,Cy and Bella and perhaps Findir and Aisa?The first two looks more probable
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Wow! this is a great book. I found myself fully immersed in this story,I hardly read stories about magic and supernatural beings but this story had me hooked up. Kudos to the writer,I hope you continue your daily update ? ? ? ?
I will only compare this book to that 'Digging to survive' novel.(read 25 chapters) Simple answer: THIS IS BETTER.Long answer: Story has more world building, power system, with more side characters/potential antagonists. Better translation quality. First two chapters talks about the background of the characters and their relationships with each other(mostly business relations). In summary, the two novels have the same setting, same cheat(somewhat), and same plot decisions(trading and digging parts) but this is better executed and not monotonous as the other one. It even has better writing quality when describing battles.
Hallo! I just have to say I've previously read their work. The book its called Level 100 Farmer and I apsolutly love how they write. That's actually the reason I decided to read their other work. I actually have already read all they've posted so far on the other book so I wanted to read this one. But I haven't started reading this one yet I have faith though that this will also captivate me to spend all my time to read this one also. I plan to read their other stories also after this one. So, if your having trouble chosing to read this one or not I assure you that this will be interesting to you. That's saying if you do indeed enjoy slow burners like they said before hand or well typed. And that's Good Day.
Writing Quality is a 4-star because although there's a wide use of jargons and gaming slang terms, there are a few typos here and there, and the sentence flow sometimes felt a bit awkward; I tend to drown during writing so I sometimes missed those silly mistakes. Even for Chapter 1 I spent 1 whole day trying to proofread it myself, which took a lot of time from me writing.Stability of Updates is a 3-star because so far, I only have two major story arcs planned which would amount to 50+ chapters. I'll however, am confident to deliver at least 1 chapter a week, as there's another title I'm working on as well.Story Development is a 5-star because so far, there is a logical sequence of events take happened one after another, and I try to reduce using plot armor as much as I could consciously, and even if there is a plot armor, I try to make it not OP and can be countered.Character Design is a 4-star, I based the MC of a 30-years old man with no career IRL. Thus, he had a very .old-man vibes to him, but his personality was very immature because he spent his leisure time playing video games with people 5-10 years younger than him - a typical man-child. I am already planning to introduce another key character in the coming chapters.World Background is a 5-star because I actually based the story setting from a recurrent nightmare I had when I was a child. It was so traumatic that I remember vividly the details of that world. I really want to describe the world that I saw in my dream.P.S. I am the author of Cal.Prognos and I personally have a few opinions on this work of mine.
Absolutely amazing, one of the best books I have ever read. I am willing to spend money on this and continue doing so. Thank you to the author for creating this masterpiece.
Have to say, story could be better, but author has so many mistakes, often using the wrong words, which is very annoying, some readers even pointed some mistakes out, but author just ignores it. Is it so hard to proof read?Story is okay, but nothing which truly captures me, wish I hadnt unlocked all chapters, a waste of my coins. The story has truly good moments, but overall I wouldnt recommend it