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This was an awesome read. Great storyline, strong engaging characters, did not drag, great ups and downs and written fairly well. Great job author and I will look at more of your completed works.
Nice book…
Needs a lot of editing; grammatical and spelling errors. I'm looking forward to reading it, but I couldn't finish chapter 7 before I dropped it.
dang that burn a little for me lol
Unfortunately, I stopped reading because of the new writing style. I will check back in a couple weeks to see if it goes back to normal. I saw a comment on WebNovel about this issue and the Author mentions they go back to the old style pretty quickly. So I’m waiting for more chapters to verify.
Why Should I Stop Being A Villain?
Thank you for the generous update :))
Hey :)
The Legendary Mechanic one of my favorites, the way it has a believable reason and origin just makes it so good, sadly I already read it.
Anyone can tell me if they gain the vr powers in the real world as well?
Bro you guys are new to this novel(I dropped it), but that was edited by author after he got thrashed by his readers!! The original version has all the scenes written detailedly(yes, the s*x with villain) and it also shows that the FL felt good too!! I have read the original one and got devastated!! There is a reason this novel is rated 2.8!! Most of the OG readers hate this novel to the core because that whole scenario is just forced!!
title is misleading this ain’t no slice of life.
