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Good plot, perfect background and incredible writing. This is one of the best rival family type romance i've read so far, i implore y'all to give it a go as well, you'll love it?
The story captivates from the very first chapter and keeps readers hooked with its rich storytelling and complex characters.Chapter Highlights:Prologue: The journey begins with Arin, a young child separated from his parents and raised by a bear. This unique upbringing sets the stage for Arin's resilience and survival skills, immediately drawing readers into his world.Chapter 10: The Forbidden Forest: Arin's exploration of the Forbidden Forest is a standout chapter, showcasing the author's talent for vivid world-building. The encounters with magical creatures and the perilous environment add an exciting layer to Arin's adventure.Chapter 20: The Betrayal: A pivotal moment in the story, this chapter explores themes of trust and deception. The betrayal Arin faces from a close ally adds emotional depth and drives his quest for justice and understanding.Chapter 30: The Legend of Amon: The climax of the novel, where Arin confronts the mysteries surrounding his heritage and the forbidden kingdom. The revelations and battles are depicted with high stakes and intense emotions, leaving readers on the edge of their seats.Characters:Arin: The protagonist, whose journey from a lonely child to a powerful figure in the world of magic, is compelling. His growth is well-developed, making him a relatable and inspiring character.The Guardian Beast: Introduced in the Forbidden Forest, this mythical creature becomes a significant part of Arin's journey, symbolizing the bond between man and nature.Allies and Enemies: The novel features a diverse cast of supporting characters, each with their backstories and motivations, enriching the narrative and adding layers of intrigue.Overall Impression: "Lost Monarch: A Tale of Forbidden Powers" is a must-read for fantasy enthusiasts. The author's ability to create a magical yet dangerous world, combined with a plot filled with twists and turns, makes this novel a standout. The emotional depth of the characters and the beautifully described settings ensure that readers are fully immersed in Arin's epic journey from start to finish.If you enjoy stories of adventure, magic, and the quest for self-discovery, this novel is definitely worth adding to your library.
please don't drop it. I am eagerly waiting for the rest of the chapters
I had my fill! It was a great one, also a fascinating and interesting novel.keep it up, author!
Read up to chapter 48 so far (free chapters). Similar starting problems that I had with Stealing Spree. I just really dislike the MC and the whole "salesman" past of his sounds soooo sketchy and like absolute human scum (like "talking old grandmas into spending their last savings into a miracle cure" type of person)... Another problem I personally had was the pace of the relationship development. I'll try to avoid spoilers, but it went from 5% in the past year to 100% in 2 days. Combined with his new found ability to actually (maybe) manipulate people or at least emotions to his will, it's quite questionable how much of it is the poor girl's free will or something else. But as I mentioned before: I had the same problems with the other novel (Stealing Spree) and really really hated the MC and relationship development at the start. I only kept reading because I liked the modern world setting and had a friend who promised me that it (the relationships) would get better later on. By now, I really love the story and read every single chapter. But even so, I don't know if I have the strength again to fight through such a start once more. Especially if I don't know what will change and the constant fear of how much "fake" feelings are in there with the kind of ability the mc possesses.
the writing and description overall is good though I feel the story a little empty honestly. it would have been better if there was an introduction about how the mc died in the first chapter, here we're directly thrown in action without context(the synopsis isn't enough it has to be in the story ) another point is that it's a system story, I expect more action, how will the mc evolve further? it feels too slow. I hope to see an improvement in these aspects , you have won a daily reader after all :D
Hey guys, Shameless Author here. I hope you enjoy this novel, i recommend it for you guys looking for a bit of action. If you have any questions please let me know.
It's ROTK fanfic so I raised my hopes high. And actually, author seems to know his craft. What just irked me is the weird formatting of the story. Wrong punctuations and capitalization all over the story made it hard for me to focus on the plot. I don't care about wrong grammar or spelling, my brain is already too used to mtling Chinese stories so I don't have problems with wrong grammar/spelling. As long as I can understand the meaning, it's all okay. But in this novel, my problem is different. I always got distracted by the weird formatting. I'm not sure if that is part of author's style, but whenever I want to get immersed in the story but noticed so many distractions midway, I feel like murdering people. The feeling intensified the more I read the next chapters and see that the formatting is still the same.
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Seen the security guard there. I greet the Securityman like a normal day. "Hi Securityman."
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