Keep it up your creation is a master piece just like watching a real move
how to make a dog like this song is a form of the day
This is a brilliant start. The first few chapters foreshadow the possibility of not only multiple worlds, but that some people are actually aware of the existence of these parallel worlds. The MC obviously has a family that is involved in one way or another with transactions between the human and the elven worlds since they readily accepted the fact of a normal elf popping into their house. The interactions between the elf and the humans shows the delicate relationsh of little trust between the two races, and perhaps only the younger generation aren’t constrained by these feelings as they meet and establish connections through an MMORPG game. These short 9 chapters opened the gates for countless possible plot developments and I won’t lie, keeping the balance between the interrelationships of the human and elven grownups, the younger generations, and the in-game plot will be very challenging as it is intriguing. A story of this magnitude is better done slowly and calmly, don’t rush with the writing! One lovely chapter per day will do. ❤️
When the author released not one but TWO new books and asked us to support them, we were assured that it would in no way affect the daily updates of MHS. I was doubtful of this politician-like promise as MHS, being a fanfic, earns him nothing, but I was willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. Sure enough, while his other books update regularly MHS has seen 2 updates in 12 days. I could stomach it if the author came forward and admitted to his mistakes, saying that he had overreached - but no, he just neglects his promise and this work in favor of more successful ones as far as I can see. I'm very tempted to go to his other books and one-star spam those with an army of alts, but I'd like to think I'm not THAT petty. Still, I am disappointed to say the least, and I'm sure many of your fans who supported you from day 1 are too.
Has Author given up on writing this novel? I truly hope not!! I'm addicted to this story so please please please update some chapters??? Please?!?!?!?!
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
"Really Sir? So I was not a homo even though I'm homo? I knew it." Mr. Sangefull answered panicly.
"Oh ...," I replied
And tada ... What i saw is an bigger toy, bigger than the toy that Doctor ever playing with me, bigger than the electric chair.
"My lord Light, My Lord Light." Faintly heard in Light ear.
"Are we the only ones who don't make it?"
"You guys being polite each other, can we enter now and eat, we are pretty hungry right now"