It's a well-written story, and the main characters are satisfactorily developed, however, the number of chapters seems to be unsatisfactory for the author to be able to extract the full potential of what has been presented so far (until chapter 40, which is where I left off) . There are also some uncomfortable little points to read, but hard to imagine, like the fact that the protagonist has been a virgin for 100,000 years, or simply the age of the characters (the youngest so far is 400 years old), the protagonist is 100,000 and his wife 200.00... I can only imagine an elderly couple, even if they look young.In the end the story is good, the negative points are small and don't interfere with the experience, I just wish it was a story with a bigger development (and with more chapters!), but anyway I'll keep reading until the end, until now I recommend it!
Author pls keep writing and we readers hope to reach the end of the novel with you, pls keep in mind that there are still others anticipating for this novel and they just don't comment pretty much also,Thanks for your hardwork.d=(´▽｀)=b
usually I only read few chapters In these types 100x or 10000x.. novels..afterthat I feel bored and quit reading.but I read whole 20 released chapters now.its s entertaining book until now.dont know about future chapters
I Honeslty really like it but you need to fix the grammer, at some points I’m straight guessing what ur trying to write. Other than writing everything is dope hope the story continues for a while .
giving it a 1 star cuz the author probably dropped the novel just so that he can start another novel.. I didn't even bother checking if the novel has been dropped before reading the raws.. who would've thought that a dropped novel would get selected for trial read..
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Pros:
The quality of the writing is superb.
Characters are relatively well thought out and have personality
World is pretty good, couple things are a bit strange but that may be due to a slow build up.
Cons:
Story is all over the place, a lot of missing information that would make some parts easier to keep together.
The Update Stability is what makes this book hard to stay excited for; 2 chapters a week isn’t uncommon for amateur writers. One problem is the chapters are a little short.
But the BIGGEST issue is the cost of reading, specifically the Privilege Access. 700+ coins for 9 chapters is not a fair price. Privilege lasts a month, approximately 8 chapters a month for 700+ coins is not worth the money readers will have to pay.
I am able to pay that amount, (and I DO, I honestly enjoy this novel) but for an average reader I would not recommend doing so.
This novel is like most Urban cultivation novels if all the cultivation was removed and all that was left was the boring filler. The things like stone gambling and antique appraisal that usually just sets the stage for face slapping moments that while intertwining get repetitive and boring really quick. This isn't a bad novel and I could probably ly enjoy it for a short while but that's it. I hope this one isn't chosen as it would be a waste of a pick for the aforementioned reason.
at chapter five i want to beat MC to death. And not because he's kinda obnoxious, it just that the character's supposed background and his actual characteristic clashes. For example, very early on it was mentioned he got a family farm. More importantly, he likes to grow plant (amateur planter). But then he didn't show even a smidgen characteristic of a planter. He didn't planned things. He shows no interest in learning about plants or growing plants, and he's not careful at all. All he shows so far is the characteristic of a spoilt cityboy, complete with laziness. The only good thing he shows is he's not shy of dirt, and can actually do work. hopefully he'll get better.
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