This started off good but too many pov switches literally mc barely appears and the author drags side character arcs for no reason
It says a lot about an Author that can ceaselessly catalyze stories that are so incomparable to any that are out there. Thank You for sharing yet another Aimee Lynn. I think it’s impossible not to be completely enamored by anything you create. ?✨?✨
Its very rare to see cultivation novels that revolve around the law infact i know of none. .. this is a good story well written in a beautiful world, haven't reached far in reading it but so far so good.its worth looking into
What a little gem I found. why is this story not on the highest rankings is beyond me. the writing and the flow are excellent, even if the story is moving a little too slow (not a criticism, I'm simply greedy for more haha). Keep it up, love your work.
This one of the reviews for this novel on novel updates""" This novel is the definition of "Exhausting
Alright, this novel is gutsy and ambitious. Three entirely different storylines of different genres meshed together incredibly well using that one demon lord.Seriously, I was scared for this one. I thought the stories would clash, and that there would be tonal clashes and clashes for which story takes the spotlight.But this goddamned author pulled it off.And he pulled it off to an extent I've seriously only seen in published books.Alright, yeah, so if you, the person reading the review, hasn't cought on to the fact that I love this book and that this is just going to be me gushing all over it, then let me make it clear.I LOVE this book.The writing is phenomenal. It's set on Earth and I'd say it's a pretty solid planet as far as word building goes.It seems to be very well researched. I can't elaborate on this point really because I haven't had much experience with the character and location and customs settings present in this book, and as a typical Webnovel reader I'm too lazy to cross reference it against stuff, but yeah it feels really well researched.The writing style is great. The flow and pace just fits the story like a glove. It's introspective in the best of ways. It's just great, yeah? There's some occasional spelling issues I've come across but c'mon, that's still leagues better than any Webnovel I've seen on here.The characters oooh boy the characters I love em to bits. Character development and growth is on point. Characters are all hella likable. They are characteristic of how much effort went into this book and how much I love it.Alright, I'll close this off by saying a couple more things sike this brain isn't going to let me stop gushing so soon-a) It's great.b) I love it.c) Yes it does have quite a bit of LGBTQ rep and boy do the characters gain depth due to the societal impacts of that, but it's not the focus of the book.d) I need more chapterse) Hey almost daily uploads would you look at that thank you authorf) I have no clue why I'm still doing this.7) I will not apologise for any time wasted on reading this 'review'
The story actually sounds quite interesting but every chapter I read it turns out to be more and more confusing.Real world people appear as NPS's inside the gameworld. Nothing is explained, while you get more and more information that is just not relevant for the current story progress. Lots of things don't make much sense.