I would say, Up until now everything is a masterpiece????
The story seems very interesting with lots of potential, but I'm very sorry to say this, but the writing quality is not that great.... ? Some paragraphs are broken on wrong places, being cut in half in the middle of a dialogue. And some parts are written like you are writing a script instead of a story + the way you write the actions around the dialogue is unnatural and off putting.Don't take my feedback to the heart, I'm just saying this because I wish for you to improve so I can enjoy the story. Please continue to write ?
I apologize for the chapters that have few words in it. I'll try to improve the quality in the upcoming chapters.
the book is a good book . you can do better though
I think story is amazing and something new.
this novel is one of the best out there it needs an anime or mangwa adaptaion. the story is so amazing and it keeped me hooked this is the first time i ve read a novel till ted end without feeling any kind of bordom
This Novel was created by friends, through friends, and I'm one of them who made my character who I won't tell. Honestly this Novel was authored by a schoolmate by mine which first barely had any popularity back then, now thanks to the help of the friends and the author who made this. A second novel is soon... Just a slight for showing.
well since it`s my novel and i have been building the ideas inside my head for the past 6 years imma give my self 5 stars hopefully you guys enjoy reading my humble work its not much but thats my best so far.
Not your typical evil stepmother novel,this is the best novel you'd ever read on this app!!
I really look forward to the future chapters.
Nice story i really like the character development the quality is really good keep it up..
Big fat bird likes it. I enjoy it a lot. thanks for it