well written, just wished there was more background detail and character descriptions. at the moment the story seems...fine but I'm just waiting to see what will happen next. i do hope to see some more developments with the characters. i already like Adam and Serena(?) interesting characters, I do want more depth out of this. so far the story is beginning so I don't want to ask for too much. the writing is consistent and consise. I like the world you've written, zombies, factions and the game store. keep up the good work author. very unique idea also.
The novel was unexpectedly quite good. The story is slow paced so if you are looking for a OP MC within the first 100 chapter then this is not the novel for you. The MC is extremely strong for his age but is still nothing compared to the rest of the world.The biggest positive of the novel is the MC. The MC is a well written morrally grey character with actual good characters development.
This book is a hidden gem with tons of potential. The unique setting and premise where the MC is a summon make for a refreshing read. The writing quality is top-notch, and the author maintains a consistent upload schedule. If they keep this up, the story is bound to become something great. Can’t wait for more chapters !
The novel is fast paced and nicely written. The premise and the world building is unique and let' see in what direction the story moves. Has a lot of potential and I recommend everyone to try it
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New to this kind of work tried to write my best hopefully you will like it and don't forget to share and wait for new chapters. By writer
This is honestly one of the most well put stories I have read on hear. The characters are interesting, the imagery is great, and the world is fascinating.Fights are very well done and dynamic. I am going to keep following this master piece until the end!
I'm enjoying this and it looks fun and entertaining hope we get more chapters's
nice plot only read 2 chapters and I'm hooked.
This is a great read and the characters are superb
Great story and imagination. This book was well written and great structure . I’m very impressed continue creating and I’ll keep reading young man!
I gotta say I never thought someone would put this much work into a book, thanks, this is awesome. Please don't drop this book, especially the world setting, it's awesome.