This is a fire! , it really scared me, I never thought reading any horror stories could really scare me, thank you very much author for the amazing story. good luck on your journey.
Is it harem or no? B--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------->
Great story!I will rate you 5 stars since I have been following this story for too long.At first, I didn't want to rate you since I thought it was trash.However, after some time, I began to like it! Everything is basically to my liking ??
Alright, let me start this review by stating that I've only read till chapter 15 so the author might have improved after. Now for the review itself, I'll start with what I do think the author did well. The best thing about this book is the updating stability with the book getting at least a chapter a day your list won't go a while before reading, now unfortunately that's where the good part kind of stops.Now for the part I thought was the worst has to be the world-building and further the world itself, my reasoning for this is that whenever I'm reading I find myself highly confused as to why some things like plastic exist and then later I'm told they have gold coins as currency. The biggest cause of this problem in my opinion how the author glazes over things that are important to world-building and leads to a high lack of detail. For the rest of the book, I find it to be mostly average with the writing quality being fine but with mistakes still very visible every chapter or so. Lastly, I would like to comment on the character design of this book which is very lacking so far landing as the second worst, in my opinion, the cause of this is how inconsistent the characters have acted compared to their introduction, an example is how Luke started the book by going to test if he had awakened at any opportunity but when given prove he might have he doesn't go test it.I will conclude this review by giving my opinion on this book. I find the book so far to be not worth my time reading, I wouldn't go as far as to say the book is bad but it is highly mid so far. If you have a problem with my opinion touch grass and read better books. See ya
Have you ever wondered, this movie is very good, but I wish there was a way to read a choppy unecessary written version of someone describing it's screenplay slowly over a dozen chapters?Well then this is the novel for you! Also my condolences on the accident that gave you brain damage.
Good potential.I don't understand why cultivation is not pit either in a more prominent position on the story of in a less one.What is the goal of this system? Is it for the main character to become strong or is it for him to develop a fortress?Because on the first 40 chapters, the main character completed plenty of missions, but no reward made him stronger..
A must read....................................................................................................................................
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Jeeze, titles and summaries are getting more and more misleading these days. With how this one is, I was expecting a proper cheat system with some absurd balance issues. Turns out it was just a LoL based system, and the title was about as useful as "invincible godking ascension" or similar garbage word salad. The story itself is rather good, overall. The plot takes its sweet time getting started, but it's not dragged out intentionally or anything, the author just actually did some setup for once. Better written than most of the stuff you see here in that regard, actually. Really hope this one makes it.
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