His Devilship CHHHAAANNN~

*Slightly more detailed review compared to others (as of V10)" My second favorite IET novel, right behind Swallowed Star. IET took his experience from his previous novels, polished everything up and then transformed it into this beast.Why is it so good? The writing quality of IET, world building,  action, details and especially the characters. His writing style is just so good. As readers, we see and feel, usually, while immersing ourselves, but I just feel that with LXY, it's more powerful. I can only explain it like this: Novels are like machines with cogs. If the cogs don't all work together properly, even if the machine "works

Up to ch 40 everything is great story wise but starting at ch 41 it's MTL, 40 good chapters are not enough to make me want to read MTL

Is it harem or no? B--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------->

Amazing book. It points to the core concepts and is very clear in explaining how and why things work in a web novel. While writing skills can only develop by practicing constantly, the things that this book explains would no doubt be a great help to many authors.

reading for the fourth time from the start.??. three times from previous author book. never get board???????????????????

Okay, the second review of the day.This is my review after reading chapter 1, it wasn't because of the story not being interring enough, but rather I have no time.So, the plot is a gem, but left unploshed sue to negligence and well, authors lack of consciousness.I ain't sayinG Author isn't good enough or this book is trash. I personally liv d what I read in chapter 1. but as a reader, I should be cursing at the author. it gave me a hard time reading it. so, I was pissed but as a fellow writer I can understand.I would say, to check your para comments, I did as much as I could and try to fix them. don't just change themz review them and think it for yourself. I haven't read the enite story yet.The plot is good, but grammar isn't terrible, but a mess and made it harder to understand, making me reread paras simetimes thrice to comprehend the devine meaning hidden inside of them.So, focus on Style - I can let go of Grammar, but style should be goodGrammarcommas