I love the story, and it feels a bit unique to me, a zombie in their era. Everything is well-written and easy to understand. Everything is clear, including Jannah's preparations over six days, which are very entertaining. My only comment is that the chapters are quite short, hehe. Anyway, overall, it’s good!
A very interesting book All characters are well represented
W book, I love the plot bro, keep up the good work man
This novel is fantastic, I was hooked from the first chapter. Every detail that the writer gives us makes us imagine every scene as if we were living it. I recommend it 10/10
— The Immortal Fate Shield System ⚡Q) How is the fate of characters determined in the novel?A) The readers themselves decide the fate of the characters! ?Here’s how it works: If a character, including the MC, gets a lot of negative feedback due to their actions, they will face consequences in future chapters. ? On the other hand, if they are praised, they will receive rewards! ? This system gives you the power to influence the story like the Heavens themselves. Want to see a character punished? ⚡ It will happen.Whether it’s influencing romantic outcomes ? or affecting a character’s fate, your comments will shape their future. The MC might face challenges or even be rewarded based on your feedback.Rules:To participate, simply leave your thoughts in the comments of each chapter ?. All feedback will be reviewed, and its effects will be seen in future chapters. For example, criticize ‘Little Fatty’ enough in Chapter 10, and by Chapter 24, expect a thunderous bolt ⚡️ to punish him for his actions!This system applies to all characters, but remember—the author still holds the 'Higher-up' privileges to balance the story ⚖️. Feel free to ask any questions about how this system works in the comments below! ?___Common Doubts and Concerns!Q) Can my comments really affect the plot? A) Yes! The author reviews every comment, and the story will evolve based on your feedback. ?Q) Can my favorite character be at risk? A) It's possible! But just as you can criticize characters, you can also defend them with positive comments. ?️Q) How quickly will changes happen?A) The effects of your feedback will be seen in future chapters, depending on the volume of comments. ?Q) What if I want a character to survive but others don’t? A) It depends on the collective feedback. However, the author will ensure that no major developments disrupt the story’s natural flow. ?
I'm not even gonna lie, I didn't read it all. But from what I've read tells me this writer has a handle on there craft. If you sit down and read, you will enjoy. Fun, energetic and a genuine experience for all.
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This novel pretty good, but the conflict is a bit forced
Good start, a uniqu story. I'll update agai. in later chaps.
Passing by . .
Huffing as she wiped the blood away from her lip, she glared into the hole the Sentry had created with her body. Standing in the opening were two other Sentries, their dead, glowing red eyes staring at her unblinkingly.
I kept what watch I could on the fight, energy lashing back and forth between the Kryptonian and the monstrous space starfish. What borrowed breath I had caught in my throat as a beam from Starro broke open an asteroid, revealing green crystalline forms. The slump in Superman's form told me all I needed to know. 'Kryptonite. When the hell am I in the continuity for kryptonite to just happen to be here? The Silver Age?'