Holomez
Get ready to have a stroke reading this. It's full of grammatical errors and typos.
Thanks for picking up this book to read.Just to explain a few things... to prepare you, readers, for what you're about to read.Santa Claus is the protagonist of this story, but I hope you all have open minds about it. The first few chapters contain a lot of info, but it's necessary. Rest assured, he doesn't remain a bearded old man forever.He has subordinates, a System, and quite a number of things, really...But that doesn't make things any easier or less interesting. Trust me, you're in for a treat.I give this novel Five Stars, not just because of my bias as an Author, but because I truly believe it deserves it. If you don't think so, kindly let me know in the comments... or by writing a review of your own to explain why.I welcome criticisms.I certainly hope you find this book to your liking, even though it's so very niche.Well, then, happy reading!
Very nice concept and an idea, however, the author totally wasted the whole thing after the first 20 chapters,*I don't have many issues regarding the strict system because it is supposed to make MC a better academy master, So the strict quest and punishments make sense.*What doesn't make sense is how illogically irresponsible MC is. Believe me it is not a lack of experience, it is just purely stupid. The only reason his students are alive is because of 100% pure luck(or lazy writing in this case).*There are a lot of inconsistencies in the chapters. Example:- How the heck did he forget that the girl he liked is dying because of a curse( Her uncle told that to his face in a previous chapter)?Anyway doesn't worth the time, definitely not worth the money.
wow, five stars for you author.you did an amazing work here. this novel is not to be missed by any.I don't know but I like Vampire novels and this one also got me .
Full marks for the effort. The first chapter was detailed and imaginative and transported me to Tolkien's world of dragons and secret treasures!!A recommended read!
Please keep updating this book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This novel is worth to read.. You're such a good writer?.. Ohh my i just can't wait to read the next chapter am so excited ?❤️... You should write more novels too i want to read more of yours.. I wish if i could read the whole novel in one day and night but it's not possible for ya i guess?.. So I'll have to wait off course... Well keep doing your job you're doing well hope your novel would bhi published soon ??.. Keep doing hard work to get your reward ?.. I'll sport ya for this..
Starts off not as great, lots of repeated wuxia elements, but gets better later on ..................????????????????????
