When she done, she gone straight to bed and fall asleep, she hasn't good rest in the way to here, since it's took 2 month to arrived, but even so she still didn't let her guard down and keep alert to her surroundings.
I appreciate the author's effort in writing using her second language and her honesty and humility. I am one person who is also very critical on grammar and proper word use, though admittedly I, too, am not perfect. But if someone will admit his/her imperfection, who am I to judge? I know it is also very costly to hire an editor and/or proofreader but if we give our generous support to new and inexperienced authors, instead of tactlessly criticising them - you will never know that things might change for the better, if not, the best. I do hope I can be of help in any way for you in your future endeavors. Love what you do and these will surely give you love in return. AJA!
"We have a reservation for 4," Matthew took charge and spoke to the lady behind the counter. "Ah yes. Mr Rose and friends, right this way," the lady said as she led them into a private room.
oh my name is vivian , would you like to come inside?
"Hello."
"A bolt of thunder hit our plains. Wherever it hit, the land would go on fire. It came from a triangular dragon."
Everyone who reach the scene see Donna in pain and the man holding the wings.
Red-faced, Jacob could only helplessly give up on his struggle and swallow his bellyful of anger before he really does get choked to death. Giving up, Jacob says with resignation visibly apparent on his face, "Okay, okay. I get it. Uncle, uncle."
Na'eemah patted his head " But that's why you need to actually do what you were assigned to do instead of running off all the time."
Raghnall's eyes furrowed as he shook his head.
The demons began to disappear one by one. Many came to get favours from Shen. After all, he would succeed the throne. He who has succeeded the previous Emperor without getting the inheritance of the Throne.
Thomas Hark sipped from his wooden cup, his tired hazelnut eyes locked onto the candle which stood at the center of the table. He watched, eyes drooping, as the miniature flame flickered and danced according to the direction of the wind.