Yipman007

Good story so far. It has some key features, but by the story came so far I can think what would be the end. Even though this might be a personal preference, but i think it will be great if the ending wasnt expected by the reader. But its just one idea. I dont have much experience in writing. So keep up the good work. Looking foward to read the full story.

Love this book so far, perfect 5 star rating for this book. I love the MC, he my type of MC, no bullshit, no messing about, just flat out gets the job done. I also like the relationship between him and Kiyumi, but I hope Risa (even tho I like her) doesn't rain on their parade. And I also love the back alley???, that back alley must have been a witness to some gore scenes?????