The Writing Quality is nice, the world building was Ok. I'm just vexed on how the MC act. He is intelligent when it comes to magic and things regarding battles; however the MC lacks some common sense and vigilance. He don't know how to stay lowkey and he should collect more information before he act. He's lack of vigilance to his surroundings causes him inconveniences. Lastly, he should open more common skill gatcha, even if he can't level them up at the same time - at least he has a lot of skill in his arsenal that can be useful to him when some unforeseen accident arrives. He can also acquire some passive skill that can help him hide his mana fluctuation and can automatically sense if there is someone spying on him.
its another trash, and another one of those stupid mc who didn't have a single bit of iq and doesnt know he's already the strongest and think his still a mortal just like the other copy paste of this novel
I love reading about Demensions and other world genre. I am liking Steve so far but i would like to know more about him. Your writing style is also very amazing. So keep it up.
This will be an indepth review from me so stop if you don't want spoilers for first 15 chapters or so.......The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc.Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid.Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting )That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.
To describe this series in a sentence, "Beautiful originality and yet lacking in all other aspects." The whole story of Lord Shadow is unique, having managed to somehow include everything from gods to aliens to a parody of MCU. The problem of this series lies in every other aspect. The grammar, character development, story development, exposition dumps, flashbacks, and romance is terrible.
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Hey author please update this novel.... I've searched this novel in the net but the English is so bad that I can't understand properly.... so I'm waiting for your update....
Hey author-san I just wanted to tell you how great your book is and how much I enjoy it. I would have given a 5 star review but with how many chapters there is I dont think its five star status but if it keeps developing down this road I do believe it can get 5 star status. I really love the system it reminds me of “Sovereign of the karmatic system” but I ended up dropping that book because it got very repetitive towards the end I hope that this novel doesnt go down that path. Also I hope that this book isnt like Martial god asura where the mc beats someones long lost son and now the mc has to beat a whole family tree. But besides that great book ? I really enjoy it and I hope you keep it up.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ????????????????
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I nicely written novel with the MC being aware of the tropes a typical xinxia has. It has a lot of potential to be developed.I really hope that it doesn’t get forgotten or dropped
Really love this novel, I recommend it to everyone that likes evil MCs, It's fantastic, especially the powers and the personality of all the characters. The MC's bearing is also superb. Top rate.