Bom eu darei uma Review sincera sobre o capítulo um que não ficou bom porém eu me esforcei para fazer os outro e além que seria injusto eu botar tudo cinco estrelas
check out mine too lolit's good ... best of luck?
ohh, not bad, there are issues but i am still enjoying it, i can see that the author is slowly improving with each chapter which is nice to see.
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Hello, Blizzard here!As the author of this book, I love it and am sure you are going to love it too. Don't believe me? Then give it a try.Now, some things to note.1) From my experience, I know readers don't like a pure smut novel (there are always exceptions though) and need a good story to go along with it so they can enjoy both things better. So, the storyline is main in this book and lemons and other things are there only to enhance and make the story more enjoyable.2) MC's Harem will be big and by the end of the story, he will have more than 10+ women.3)They all will have a deep relationship with him, and will be an important part of the storyline.Note: There is no poison like NTR i or Yuri in the story. But it will have netori and MC will have a few one night stands too because not everyone he has s*x will become his women.But, Let me say this again, this is a story based novel, so expect the number of smut chapters to be low (at least lower than my Lust System book?) Updates will be stable, 7-14 chapter/week.Now, if you have any other questions, feel free to ask below. I'll try to answer all of them.
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wow, after reading the first 10 chapters, my heart jumped into my brain, nice work. Also review my book 'Moxie; The Evil Emperor' and 'Orphaned By darkness'
So far, it's interesting and captivating. I'm waiting for more chapters from the author. I'm really captivated by the story, hope you'll keep updating
Here is my review so far...Perfect just perfect down to the details I can't wait to see more from you and this story author-san
overall entertaining. Reviewing around chapter 250.there are some minor flaws like the forced period where the mc intelligence stagnates with no explanation other than bad luck for abyssal odds of that really happening. otherwise, the novel is quite good and enjoyable to read.What i liked:- Good pace, - mc neither too low key nor an edge lord.- characters are somewhat believable where they act extreme due to cultivation side effects.- I didn't feel there were many cliché- fights and powers are pretty cool with some fines involved and not just brute force.- what i disliked:- some developments felt forced (e.g. the no int despite extracting across different paths, species, items... when before it was the most common draw)- conflicts are far too easy to trigger in their world. (mc could be minding his business walking and he might be targeted and attacked by strangers without any relationship to him and without even checking/confirming his identity or affiliation). well on the other hands, these mystics kind of have a loose end due to their powers so...
time that a bridge of this kind was actually observed. How did it actually form?
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