awesome story. It incorporates multiple genres at once. I like the way the author surprises you with certain things. like for example, when the MC said that he was playing with fate, I didn't expect fate to later on be an actual person. and then with destiny and the fairy it all merged into a rich plot that makes me crave for more. Overall 5 stars
the whole premise is quite original but it's sad that main character isn't actively doing things to streghten himself like getting knowledge how to build a gun then ordering things and parts for it going into the game to simply assemble it also since magic exist wouldn't be possible to create magic tool that works just like a gun?
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shining duos was better that's all I got to say. .