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The novel is good for what it is. It has great promise and makes you want to read more with the MC. But, you’ll soon find yourself skeptical of how the MC operates, how he knows so much technical-know-how in such diverse fields, and how he navigates the world he’s in to get what he wants. It seems too… easy. Even though you know, there is a practical and more believable alternative to getting what he wants. For example, instead of leveragint someone’s reputation to get a loan with no basis, put the building you own that has roughly similar value as collateral. Also, A lot of the things the MC gets away with or talks himself into getting, would not happen in the real world or be a lot harder.I feel as if the real world basics are not properly covered, such as some laws or policies as well as some world building, and as soon as a love interest is brought into it, the story begins to feel more forced than it felt before.I feel as if the novel just needs a lot more work.It’s ambitious and has a foundation, but it’s lacking.
Love it! Just too good Moore. I want mooooooorrreeee!!!!!
one thing about this novel that bother me is the updates cant you like update 2 chapter a day? But the rest is wonderful specially the character description and the details to the surroundings
Looking really good world is put together good and love the mystery it has set up.
I really like my own story, please review it yourself!
In my opinion, story so far is so cliche. I hope the author would put a story that would really interest or some shocking plot twist so that it will not be like some other cultivation novels. Overall, excellent work. just tired typing. lol.
In the beginning, you can see how naive and immature the MC is. I believe (I HOPE!) that it was intentional. After a few more chapters, things are getting more interesting and I'll leave another review after catching up.
Interesting book, look forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work!
i know that it's unwise of me to keep on dropping review on my book here but i decided to create this review because I want it to be a Q and A section. so if you all have any questions about the book, you can ask here and i promise to answer. also i want to use this medium to inform you all that when we have become many here, or when 20 of you have liked this review, i will start doing mass releasing updates. please bear with me if the story is quite boring or uninteresting at the start, its's because I was quite new in writing a Webnovel style book. but i promise, it gets better at the later chapters and i hope y'all stick around. and yes, I have a hundred plus chapters in stockpile so you won't have to worry about me not updating. And if you also have any idea for the next chapter, you can comment it down on the latest chapter and I will try my best to incorporate it into the next chapter. And if y'all enjoy the book, you can also motivate me by sending power stones, Golden tickets or gifts to the book, it will gladly be appreciated ?I hope y'all enjoy reading this book as much as i enjoyed writing it. so without further ado, lets's dive into the story and i hope y'all enjoy it. and don't forget, you can leave your questions here.
continue the story as in the online chapter .
Still here, still reading after some weeks since i started this novel. I'm most excited by the everyday updates.Waking up everyday or coming back from work, there's this guarantee that i will definitely get to read an update. I noticed that you don't have a contract yet. Chapter 20 wouldn't have been open if you did, right?But please keep going and don't you dare quit this novel!