I really hate when authors make the Mc mentally unstable for the sake of character development. I know as an author it seems clever and unique, but when you see this kind of trope so many times, as a reader it becomes annoying and obvious because you expect how the character is supposed to develop. When he was first transmigrated and decided to leave the dukes house instead of waitin to get disowned, it made him seem real decisive and mature but later on when he interacts with other characters or his actions he acts like a 13 year old. what makes readers want to read a novel is the premise of the story and first impression of the Mc. When you change that it’s almost like a smack in the face to us, when we thought we were getting a mature, decisive, witty, funny, and Chad Mc but what we get in turn is a whiney, mentally unstable 13 year old with a cringe system. IT RUINS THE CHARACTER. So even though we know he will grow it makes that process so much more annoying. In conclusion for a new author it’s a pretty good story and in the future I’m sure it will be a masterpiece, but as of right now it’s pretty mediocre. I hope his development won’t be a long drawn out process because it waste the readers time. Best of luck to the author ✍️ hope u keep writing?
Noice
No spoiler here move along.
Hello, I am the editor for this novel. The premise of this novel is similar to CCG but has its own particular twist that I found enjoyable. Like many of you, I have read a multitude of webnovels and enjoy new and interesting plotlines. There is no sign of this novel being a harem one (I am at chapter 60 right now). I hope you guys enjoy the novel and write a review!
fun exciting! please keep updating the novel until the end! ....................................(T.T).....................................................................
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Please author, please write on! I check this series every month and now even download this app because I read online that I can read on her with using premium. I know you are discouraged because some idiots say this story isn't good especially at the beginning and it is hard for writers to earn money, your relatives died... life is hard sometimes, I hope you are feeling better now. Please continue arran's story. I loved it since chapter 1. It is one of my few all-time favorites. I told my mother for hours on end about your novel. Actually at the start of the year I wanted to PN you and wish you well and say this novel is awesome and so very well written... but I am a bit shy and didn't do it. I regret that now. I will follow you and continue to check this series in the hope of seeing chapter 420. Ah well I guess you will never read this review. Just know there are so many people out there who read and love your story so much. I made this account to write this to you and upvote this story because it deserves it. This is my first ever review for a light novel. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
its an incredible book, i cried like hell when it ended. i wish it could have gone forever. but i loved every second of itmoxie is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee